Eh.. It was alright. Very mysterious and enigmatic. Can't wait for part 2. Seems to be setting up for something big.
Oh and BUMP
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Thanks for the feedback
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Don't take it wrong. I love how it is. I love that you're keeping secrets but maybe someone might not. This might be their first fanfiction reading and not understand what's going on.
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Will they still want to know more? Yes,yes they will. I made sure not to reference any other of my fanfics, I believe.
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I don't think you did but I personally, could feel the fireteam X within. I don't know if that's just because I'm a big fan of your work or what...
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Well, it is my same style of writing
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Yeah... Maybe that
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The Lost Arts: Chapter 2: The Sixth Coyote, A Lone Wolf: http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/154891863/0/0
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