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originally posted in: The kell of kells:Part One(FanFic)
8/30/2015 6:58:07 PM
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Nice. Best thing I can say is to seperate the paragraphs more. Cannot have more than 1 person speaking per paragraph. Ps, add #Gallery #Story, those will help :)
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