originally posted in:From our Ashes
Name: Yusor.
Human, Male, Warlock, Sunsinger
Background:
Exiled from the Tower and the City years ago for trying to reproduce Vex technology using old notes from osiris, found on mercury.
Now, after discovering a way to deactivate vex nerve-systems he decided to go back to the tower and offer the technology to the speaker and the vanguard, hoping to be accepted by the tower again.
On his way back to the tower with his jumpship something destroyed all electronics in the ship, causing him to crash in an unknown area.
Now he slowly wakes up...
Personality : Sometimes highly aggressive, but most of the time silent, rarely speaks, is always dreaming and thinking, but always concentrated when in battle.
Roleplay: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/141139249/0/0/1
English
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My exo could use you
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I see, your exo is obsessed with vex, well if i could just reach the last city we could stop the vex... but unfortunately i am stranded in Old New York (That City Name though).
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Edited by mccwrc09: 7/24/2015 4:55:15 PMMy Exo is not obsessed with the vex [spoiler]He is apart of the Vex][/spoiler] [spoiler]Or possessed by them[/spoiler]
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whoops, then i misunderstood something there.
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Good job I love it
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thank you, my first attempt ever :)
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No problem, that's really good for your first time
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[spoiler]nice[/spoiler]
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thank you, it was my first attempt on writing something with a story in english, i don´t know that many english words since i am german, but i tried my best, i just finished my first roleplay part, if you want to take a look. https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/141139249/0/0/1
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I'd say your English is on the spot. You're doing quite well.