originally posted in:CentauriAlpha Fan Fiction
Great writing. The story flows really well, and I'm quite interested to see how it progresses. You're going to need to proofread though. I spotted a few spelling errors. Other than that, keep going man!! You're doing great!
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Thanks, man. My spelling isn't flawless, and I mistype a LOT, but I'm going to make sure to proofread more extensively. Good thing I like reading my own tales.