That last paragraph gave me goosebumps. I'm going to be brutally honest here. When I first started reading this, I didn't really care for it, but as I read on, it just got better and better, and I found myself genuinely enjoying this story. It was well written and flowed nicely, and the only problems I saw were grammatical errors. Anyway, great job, Sovereign. Now I can sit and wait for the next part of your new story to come out (which better be soon). Haha.