Read every bit. Well done on this one as well! Not sure if you did this on purpose, but having two stories running at once (flashback and present) makes the read very entertaining. I was dying (no pun intended) to find out what was going on during the recording. Then again I think I knew all along, I just didn't want to acknowledge it. *sigh* And now I'm sad that I've lost a fictional character I didn't know 10 minutes ago, GREAT, lol.
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HAHA, thank you for the feedback. Yeah I mean, after I wrote this I checked some other peoples fan fiction and it appears the dying guardians last ghost recording is a quite popular topic. Nothing wrong with that, though, it IS interesting. I felt that the end could have been a bit better described on my part but I did not want to focus too much on the actual death, but rather on the journey from being a guy with a ghost to being a guardian. Anyway thank you for reading, I know this is long so I really appreciate that you took the time for it. I think as far as the Hunter is concerned, she might come back. It would be an interesting way to build up a backstory for her, I guess.
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Well if you make a sequel to the story I'll definitely read it. I look forward to seeing what trouble she gets into from now on.
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Thank you! I will do my best not to disappoint.