originally posted in:CentauriAlpha Fan Fiction
Awesome!
The part when Jade said 'What good are you?' was kinda cringey though. Overall good story! Nice use of the Skullfort's 'gain health each time you pick up an orb of light' ability!
But the Helm of Inmost light had a[i] slightly[/i] better description. ' The light shines brightest in those it consumes'
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Thanks! :) I'll edit out the cringey part Haha And yeah, I like the Helm of Inmost Light, but the description for the Skullfort gave me better inspiration, I guess. If I ever think of a good plot for the Inmost Light helm, I'll write one!
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LOVED your Saint 14 story!
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Thanks man!!