I like. Although I would think the warlock to be somewhat of a intellectual, and the phrase "you little dicks" come off like either a 14 year old or a white trash tweaker in his 40's. Could not get that image out of my head.
Love the story in general. Would have liked to see more of the battle.
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Well, I don't know. Perhaps there is another word that would have the same vibe, but something about all Yor just seems like he has always wanted to say that, even when he doesn't. I could change it if you have a good alternate line. I was mostly going for the attitude.