This is just the beginning really. I just want some thoughts on people's take on it, before I go to the trouble of writing more. [spoiler]Don't want to make unnecessary work for myself. *sexual winks intensify*[/spoiler]

Understandable. Like I said, it seems interesting, which is kinda what you want in the first few chapters. Hook the reader in the beginning so that they can't escape your clutches later. [spoiler]It seems like a post apocalyptic setting. Do you have any ideas where you're going to take it?[/spoiler]

Not exactly 'post apocalyptic'. It's the aftermath of a war, but it's not 'apocalypse' level.