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原先发布于:The Black Garden
原先发布于: Shachal - Chapter 26: Heart...
由Hobbes92编辑: 1/28/2015 1:01:43 AM
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Superb chapter. Eloquently written and that ending was quite unexpected.
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  • Not for me. I've been dreading this chapter since I started. It's hard to decide whether or not I love or hate this chapter. So what did you think of the way the end happened?

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  • 由Hobbes92编辑: 1/28/2015 1:12:48 AM
    I can see why. I thought it was very emotional and personal. I don't want to say too much to prevent spoilers, but it caught me off guard and I must admit it was particularly touching.

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  • I understand and I'll go with you on that one. In that case, what did you think of the battle and escape?

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  • I thought it was suspenseful and full of exciting tactics used by both sides.

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  • Well the Cabal are supposed to be very militaristic. I did my best to try to capture that trait. So, since this Gladiator actually had a chance to fight, instead of the one that took a big piece of metal to the dome, what did you think of him compared to the other Cabal types?

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  • Fascinating. I surprised with the final action that it took, not standing its ground. I was curious, have you mentioned the Fallen Raiders before?

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  • 由SaviorsBlood编辑: 1/28/2015 1:28:24 AM
    From what I remember, he never backed away. At least not until he had no choice in the matter and got his head thrown into the ground. Gladiators never run. Yes, I have. First chapter I mentioned them in was Chapter 6, the first combat chapter of Shachal. Close range specialists of the Fallen faction.

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  • Oh, my mistake, sometimes I read to fast and skip over things. Before that though I thought he was pretty impressive, how much damage he could take and deal out. Alright, I had forgotten about them.

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  • 由SaviorsBlood编辑: 1/28/2015 1:37:30 AM
    I'm guilty of the same thing often times. I have to say the Gladiator was my favorite Cabal concept in their hierarchy. I've had fun making them distinctly ferocious compared to their other counterparts. They don't follow the same regulations the more formal soldiers are in regards to authority. What did you think of my only grenade concept? Good? Bad? Ugly? All of the above, depending on who you're talking about?

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  • 由Hobbes92编辑: 1/28/2015 1:45:20 AM
    I liked it, it was very shocking. Good, to be more strait forward. Gladiators must be feared among their own ranks as well as by the enemy.

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  • "Shocking". Nice, I like it's concussive impact too. They are indeed. In Chapter 24, in fact, two Praetorians cowered before the one that almost killed Tharsos. And the Gladiator killed them as well, to top it off.

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  • Ruthless. I don;t recall the Cabal command that you mentioned this chapter. The Legate and...I can't find the other, but it began with a "P" and had something to do with Roman Commanders.

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  • 由SaviorsBlood编辑: 1/28/2015 2:05:25 AM
    The Legate and the Imperator. And they were inspired from the Roman military. Back when I was building my story, and I came to the hierarchies of each faction, friend and foe alike, and started building upon what they had introduced. Back then, all we knew about were Legionnaires and Centurions, but it doesn't take a genius to know they were inspired by the Roman military hierarchy, so that's where I did my research. So in ascending order, at least in my story, you get Legionnaire, Centurion, Praetorian, Gladiator (which is somewhat separate from the formal military, but serves as the strongest Cabal outside of the leadership), Legate, and the Imperator (the usual translation for the Roman Generals). There is one other Cabal, however, that I haven't introduced yet, but I would be surprised if anyone can't determine which one that is. Fallen go from Dreg, Vandal/Marauder/Raider, Captain, Honor Guard, Admiral, and Lord. That is their complete hierarchy. And as far as Hive go, you have the Thrall, Sentry, Sorcerer, Knight, and Paladin. There are another three units that haven't been introduced in that one. And as for the Vex, well their time will come.

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  • Ah, alright. There I go again, don't know how I even got "p" instead of "i". Seems that the Cabal have quite the grasp on the Buried City, do they share common ground with the Fallen here?

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  • Mars is owned by the Cabal, but that doesn't keep the Fallen from visiting when necessary. If you remember correctly, they do have an alliance between them. You could say there was an agreement that the Cabal and Fallen would get their own planets. Cabal got Mars, and Fallen get Earth. Only thing is the complete dominion of Earth hasn't come to fruition yet, and that explains why the Fallen are so bitter toward humanity and are getting so aggressive.

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  • Hmm, that would explain a lot. What about the Vex?

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  • What about the Vex? Haha, they have Venus right? I'm sorry, but I'm going to be very tight-lipped about the Vex. Their introduction is special, so not as to spoil it, I'm not going to say more than what you know. They're time-traveling robots that occupy Venus. That's about all you're gonna get for now, and you can thank Bungie for that kind of openness on a factor of the story.

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  • Vex have a presence on Venus, but I'm unsure if they have it in their clutches just yet. Fine, I'll just wait and see. I don't think we've encountered Vex in your story yet, have we?

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  • Well, be sure to hang onto that thought when I do get to the Vex and even afterward. No, not yet, but they will play their part, just like the others. I've designed each faction to be particularly relevant to the story. All of them are important and serve an important role in the plot, each in their own unique ways.

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  • Alrighty then. Great chapter, very excited to read 27.

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  • Thank you. Although it's going to be an adjustment going forward from here, I'm looking forward to writing it.

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  • 由SaviorsBlood编辑: 1/28/2015 1:01:12 AM
    I guess that's one way of putting it. I gotta say it: I hated writing this one man. Do me a favor and read the end again. You know what part, but while you do, listen to the song "Epilogue" by Eluveitie, and try to tell me that doesn't fit the ending. Or at least think of the conclusion while you listen to it. Edit: Found it. Just watch the attached video.

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  • 由Hobbes92编辑: 1/28/2015 1:37:13 AM
    Yes, it does fit the ending of the chapter very well. Is that the song you listened to while you wrote that part?

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  • Inadvertently, yes. I didn't even realize I was matching the theme when I started playing Eluveitie in my Itunes library. By the time I finished proofreading the end, I was listening to the Prologue of the same album, which is spoken by the same man and has the same style. After noticing that, I went to listen to the more instrumental Epilogue and reread the end. I was astounded at the match. Even the whole Celtic music style fit, but probably most of all, the words spoken by the narrator seemed to create a similar imagery within this chapter.

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  • Yeah, it was very well spoken and increased the mental picture of the end.

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