Thank you for the welcoming words. I've been working on this one for a little over a year now, and I'm not done, so I guess it's closer to a novel(?) than a short story. It's always good to meet up with another fellow writing enthusiast. Have you heard of the Black Garden? It's a Destiny writing community and has a collection of tons of stories.
Wow I never have! Could I maybe have a link? Oh and would you be interested in reading any of my short stories? (I have around 15-20 of them, they centre around a character named Teidan.)
I use my phone often too, but it's an outdated version of the Bungie.net app, so some things are a pain to use. However you decide to communicate your links is fine with me. Hope you enjoy the surfing on the BG. There's a ton of stuff in there. I haven't even read everything.