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6/21/2014 3:42:09 AM
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Ok Flood, rate my song.

I fell in love with these chords a couple months back and decided to try my hand at writing some music with them. This is the first verse and chorus. I'm working on an intro, have a couple other verses, and a breakdown. My singing is very bad, I know. First of all, I half assed it since my family is here and don't want them to hear me. Secondly, I just suck, I only sang so you guys can get a feel of how the lyrics are incorporated with the chords. I'll put the lyrics here: Verse 1: I never meant to do this to you I never meant to leave a stained stare on your face I whispered lies and promised bliss, Healed your sore and tattered wrists Then what I gave was sorely missed It's remnants in the palm of your fist Chorus: I'm sorry I wouldn't listen I'm sorry I didn't see My ignorance wasn't forgotten Now it's my turn to feel What it was like What it was like x2 Feel free to give me feedback, or insult me for sucking at singing, it's all valuable feedback.

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