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原先发布于：Art and Stuff
由MarshMellonie编辑：
7/20/2013 1:10:09 AM
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Working Critique: Awoken Warlock
Getting the feel for the wacom again... Anyways this is my take on an Awoken warlock. This a work in progress guys, and I need some fresh eyes to give it a once over. Lets call it a working critique, please criticism [b]is[/b] [i]encouraged! [/i]
And thanks again guys for the support and being awesome!
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3 回复由Cal Carlson编辑： 7/22/2013 4:48:20 AMVery cool! I love the face and overall positioning. That being said It may just be an illusion from the armor but the proportions of her right shoulder seem a bit off. I think either moving the scarf to the other side or moving the shoulder pad would balance her shoulder area a lot more. Really great work so far I look forward to seeing more of it. Edit: spelling
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You have nice skills and a good imagination. I can imagine such haircut in-game for female awoken happening. I'm reakly fond of her face, really. Will you keep drawing? I also like that it looks more of a sketch than a final illustration. Keep it up!
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3 回复First of all this is awesome!!! Love the artwork One little criticism since you said you'd accept it is that her right arm and left hand seem a little disproportional to the rest of her body. Like I understand that her right arm is cocked back but it still seems small to me. Other than that it's sweet! Keep it up, I wish I was this talented!
