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原先发布于： A Game of War I: A Game of War (Fanfiction)
1/23/2020 1:21:59 AM
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Great job! It is only, what the third appearance of this acendant knight and I already hate him! On the grammatical side of things I'm not as experienced as my (friend?) Kseth, but I did notice a few small errors. I won't point them out unless you want me to. Keep up the good work!
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