This story is great! At times it feels very amateur and at times very professional. I am an English Major in College have a high standard for reading and writing and I found this to be really entertaining. It was enjoyable and I wish the Author as much support as possible. (P. S.) I consider myself a Lore guy and I found almost no error in his analysis of Vex, Hive, Cayde, Fallen, the Darkness or almost any other aspect of Destiny.