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1/15/2016 3:08:11 AM
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This is [b]awesome[/b]!
I love how you describe the combat. I don't think I've ever been able to do it that well! It's easy to read and, once again, you're doing a good job of painting the picture so to speak.
The plot's really interesting too. Can't wait for the next one!
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Thanks for the comment! I just read back over it for the first time since posting it yesterday, and I realized just how short it is. Oops. XD I also have this way of "writing myself into a corner", so to speak. I get to a point where I find it difficult to keep going, not because I don't know what's going to happen, but because I'm not sure how to go about the wordage for it. I'm also one of those "no blood, no bullets, no fun" types who believes that you have to put your character through the wringer to really make the story shine; but at the same time, I struggle to write any extreme violence because I guess I'm afraid of what other folks might think. Wow, that turned into a bigger wall of text than I intended. lol Thank you for your kind words! I hope to continue this even further, and perhaps even approach the word limit next time!
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Yeah no prob'! Don't be afraid to get too intense though. You've got a talent for describing the action, so it definitely won't put people off as much. Another thing, try writing stuff down little by little. I don't think I've ever written a whole episode, start to finish, all at one time. Looking forward to seeing the next one :) Keep up the good work!
