Ah man. It's good stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter. One of the better fanfictions I've read. Some are very poorly written, but this allows you to form attachment to the characters. And, in a way, creates tension. On one hand, you want the main characters to succeed, since the story focuses around them. On the other hand, you want the gaurdians, almost the "bad guys" in the story to succeed, because, since you play the game as one, you relate to them. It's interesting in that sense.
Right. Now every time I pop a dreg with a single hand cannon shot, I think to myself.
"Who was he? Did he have a family? Hopes? Dreams? Aspirations?"
Who's the real monster?
[spoiler]we all know it's the hive[/spoiler]
[spoiler]huehuehuehuehue[/spoiler]
Interesting concept..... with varies as a link, the eliksni, cabal, awoken, and guardians appear to be the intelligent species... could they realize the real threat to organic life is the vex?
[spoiler]we already know oryx is such a puss he'll be able to be beaten by gaurdians[/spoiler]