So. Far. Behind. I think I said this before, enemy of my enemy, anyway, I enjoyed it. I wouldn't use so many exclamation points. I feel like I see one in every paragraph. "I got up, and drank a cup of coffee! It was great!" It's a punctuation mark that should be used infrequently. "The line of Alphas was beyond comprehension. There must have been thousands of them!" Something like that. Anyway, like I said, I'm enjoying this. Keep up the good work. Oh, you were missing a letter when you described the Alpha ship that got destroyed.I think it's suppose to be *Onyx*. ;-)