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1/10/2013 9:35:05 PM
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So how can this improve?
No, I am NOT talking about the forums on this site that has changed so very much... I am talking about my first Video Review that has spawned from my beginnings on this site, and from my own site.
So guys, what can be done better in this video review?
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1 回覆Didn't need to play the entire intro at the beginning and your favourite part lacked context. Your voice is monotone, not the greatest. You might want to have a script for future projects, but it wasn't that bad. Not bad, but could use some work.
