It's not meant to be totally original. It's meant to take destiny and turn it into an actual story. And it's not finished, obviously.

But its just a summary of the existing grimoire. I know you can do better man, no hate, just constructive criticism

Alright, appreciated. No worries.

I mean like, we know about the ahamkaras right, you could expand on the existing grimoire snipits and create your own tale of a fireteam making a last stand, holed up in a base somewhere taking them on etc. Like a spin off story. Because we already know the basic gist of the destiny grimoire story. I like the way your weaving it together into a more coherent story though, so props