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原先发布于:The Black Garden
原先发布于: Sinclair 24 Sleeping Dog
由SaviorsBlood编辑: 7/10/2014 5:09:40 AM
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I don't really know where to start honestly. A lot happened in this one. The origins of Nora's rampages, I presume? Or am I just forgetting something? The dialogue at the end left me very curious. And this MACH soldier. Who is it? I feel like there are many significant pieces of information in here. But I would have to say my favorite part was at the end. What unfortunate timing.
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  • 由Zevenwulf编辑: 7/10/2014 6:12:35 AM
    Not the origin, but definitely a big event that'll impact Nora as more of her past comes to light. The dialogue will be important a little bit later on. As for MACH, well that'll be for later on too. Some people have horrible timing don't they?

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  • It was a very sorrowful moment. It's never easy to write those kinds of things in a story. You know it's well written when it affects you as a writer too. I hated writing Tharsos' first experience in Old Denver. It wasn't easy doing that. Yes, people do tend to have terrible timing. In this case, it was especially bad.

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  • It might not be the best moment to write but it might be an important one that shapes a character.

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  • "Hated" was the wrong word to describe it. But I agree completely. Events like that in a story can set a powerful dynamic that molds the story and its characters. At the very least, it allows readers to relate on a much closer level to the characters in a story.

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