原先发布于:The Digital Dojo
[spoiler]Please note: this is a second character, Korsis.[/spoiler]
[b]A hooded figure approaches the gates and removes something from his belt. A red blade emits from it. He extends his hand and the gates begin to shake.[/b]
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EDIT: THIS IS NO LONGER ACTIVE
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[b]He leans down, grabbing you by the throat[/b] [u]Your worst nightmare[/u] [b]He slams your head into the ground, opening a portal[/b] [u]Don't make me come back[/u] [b]He steps though, the portal closing behind him[/b]
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[spoiler]If I can advise something.... People CAN be overpowered here. Most choose not too. Since you have the force, it immediately made you a near God mod(Someone who can basically just render someone useless). You did great by taking hits. But I saw you character Jack, talk about "different storylines?"(we don't use those.) you can fix this problem by making a balanced character that is fun to fight. I guarantee you, that if you have a fun fight/character it's a 100% chance of getting in flawlessly. So I encourage you to come back and try again![/spoiler]
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[spoiler]*garbled noises* ah! I found it. *gunshot*[/spoiler] Augh... Fine. [b]He puts his hands on the ground and it begins to shake. The piece of earth he's standing on raises into the air.[/b] Who are you? I'm here on a bounty, a person named Shadow, Sith Lord, extremely powerful. You seen her?