It's a great roll for sure, but I would prefer Red Dot-OES, Counterbalance, Braced Frame and Glass Half Full/Headseeker for that laser beam/damage roll. Yours is a great damage roll though!
im sorry but imo glass half and headseeker are wasted perks glass half adds like 1 point of damage and headseeker doesnt work well with such a low impact. i prefer mine better on my hunter