Another piece of advice I should have given you earlier when you were asking but I will say now even though I will look like a dick.
Don't post more than one part in the same day, in fact, post one per week, it gives your story time to grow and people will not feel overwhelmed with having no time between to read and you won't waste all your ideas in A day and not run out of content.
This lets your talents as a storywriter flourish as you can view the criticism on each chapter (ie, grammatical mistakes, chapter was too short, felt like only one person talking, etc)
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Then post it every 3-4 days, the point is if you post it all at once, you lose the chance to get the proper criticism like I mentioned above. Also, it's actually the opposite, if you post it all at once, that's basically doing everything you can do on Destiny right on Tuesday, you run out of things to accomplish, if you space the content, you'll have more things too enjoy throughout the week, if you post it too close together, some people will grow bored because you will overwhelm them with too much in a short amount of time, you need to give people time to catch up.