This chapter turned out great!
I really liked the emotion and the fact that what she was doing was both understandable and at the same time brash, making both characters seem very human (well, in a sense).
His "poor eyesight" comment landed super well, as did her comment on losing two arms for two worlds. That last one especially. Oh, and the holding her with four arms. Very sweet and also drives home how alien he is.
Wait... when Shadow says she wants to see parts if him the she hasn't seen.. does that mean they were gonna...[i]do it?[/i] Ya know, the thing? Or did I read this wrong and I am dirty minded.
[spoiler]uwu[/spoiler]
I was operating under the assumption that they already had just by seeing how close they are ngl
So if you see any two-eyed fallen running around you know where they came from.
[spoiler]O Reader Mine[/spoiler]