The voice acting could use some work. Gotta sound like you are actually in it. And I recommend actually making your mic more static like to show that you're talking through a helmetz
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Thought thankyou for the good criticism I'll be sure to get better as you can tell I'm still getting use to it. :)
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Hehe. Trust me, I saw another YouTuber do. this kind of thing on another game and I thought it was brilliantly done. I'll keep up with this man :)
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It will get better overtime I wanted to approach it from a comedic standpoint. I will fix the audio I'm still getting used the whole audio editing.