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впервые опубликовано в:Destiny Fiction Producers
Изменено (Feldspar119):
7/27/2017 6:46:27 PM
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Finding home: Character bios.
Name: Eran.
Race: Awoken, male.
Age: 365 (since resurrection)
Look: blue skin with lighter undertones around his eyes. No hair and purple eyes. White markings across his face.
Weapons: unknown.
Personality: Kindhearted, friendly. Always willing to help others.
Ghost: Kala.
Name: Haley.
Race: Human, female.
Age: 354.
Look: light skin, with reddish brown hair. Green eyes.
Weapons: unknown.
Personality: Cares deeply about others. Often gets into trouble trying to help someone.
Ghost: Rogue.
Name: Juan.
Race: Human, male.
Age: 473.
Look: dark skin, from Hispanic descent. Short black hair.
Weapons: unknown.
Personality: fiercely loyal to his friends. Always calls them, "Mis amigos."
Ghost: Sera. Often called Chica.
[i]Note, this story takes place after D2. All weapons will be included in the final version of these bios.[/i]
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2 отв.These look really interesting. i like how you edit each character to have a certain personality, making each character it's own individual. it's interesting and can capture the readers attention. I also like how you go into detail about appearance. sometimes if you don't know what a character looks like people get connotations based on their attitude which could be bad or good depending on the personality. i'm really excited to read the story because i'm interested in how each character can develop, the things they can go through or how events change their life. the fact that it's set after d2 could be really interesting too. you could develop certain events or happenings, even relationships etc that could alter the characters attitude to others, trust etc and it'd be cool to see if you get any flashbacks in. if you read all that then 👍 and keep writing good. first bump
