Mmmmmmmm.....no. I thought about it....but no.
Maybe try working on not sounding like a corny golf commentator. Also, this is just a regular game. One that I've played. A lot. I could go do one and say, 'See what I did,' to myself and probably feel better than having watched this.
I know that sounds real negative. But it's feedback.
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That part was immature. I hear your feedback.