You guys gave me a [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/223683892/0/0/1]ton of great feedback[/url] on my[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vfe97VeWtm0&t=1s]last video[/url] and I've really learned a lot about what you guys as the community has come to expect in terms of content for Destiny. All the feedback you guys have given me in regards to how I could make a better video really made me honored; because you took the time to show me how to be better.
So here is the product of that feedback, and much more time went into the video it this time around. I planned the video, wrote out a script-like process of how the video was supposed to go, did my best to time things to the music, (which is better) and added in much more action. I'd love for you to watch it if you can, and I'd love it if you told me what you think! I love getting feedback on my work as that is the only way I'll learn to be better. If you enjoyed the video, we'd love it if you could give us a like on the Community Creations Page here: [quote]https://www.bungie.net/en/Community/Detail?itemId=227362069
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Well, enough of my blabbering, I present to you "[url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4gnFPK_cjw&t=1s]The places you can go with a Hunter[/url]". What do you guys think? :)
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1 RespuestaU luv long tim
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1 RespuestaI loved the way the supers were in tune with the music. Plus, Sepiks Redux is always gonna get you a immediate 10 points
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1 RespuestaI really enjoyed it! I'm probably not the best person to advise about video editing, but here's my feedback... What I liked: -All of your transitions were really cool ideas -I liked how you timed your Bladedancer to the music. Some of them were a few beats off, but it was really cool when you got it right (the one at 1:40 was perfect) -I liked the fast paced Shadowshot at the end of the video -It was cool how you tried to showcase both the scenery and bosses of Destiny; I'd like to see more of them. What I think you could work on: -The video as a whole was a little slow. That's not necessarily bad, but it can get a little monotonous. I would personally like to see a video like this but with the pace and music building throughout the video to some kind of climax -The music was definitely better than your last video, but the same song went on for too long. It would keep the video from being boring and accent some of your transitions to use more songs (3-4) in your next video -I'd personally like to see you transition between scenes faster, and show more total places. There's a lot to explore at every patrol location, and the raids also have some beautiful backgrounds. There's also plenty of encounters to switch between, from missions to strikes, POE, and all four raids. -Like I said before, I really liked all of the different transitions that you incorporated into your video. I'm not sure if this would keep with the idea of the video, but it would be cool to see more going on between scenes. You could try sparrow racing, or raid and POE encounters that are more than just shooting (ie being the sword runner in CE, relic runner in VOG, torn between dimensions in KF, spamming Aksis' back in WoTM), or a jumping puzzle in a raid. Idk, just a thought. Overall: This was a great video, and you're definitely progressing in the right direction. Your transitions are really great, some just need a bit more editing. I'd work on pacing, and trying to build up to a climax to keep your audience engaged. Hopefully this helped, keep up the great work!
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I thought it was really cool! Although the part right before the raid didn't quite match up to the music. Small gripe though, great job!
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3 RespuestasReally cool watching how you took the community response from your last video and incorporated it into this one :)
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4 RespuestasPortal was cool but the rest was slow paced, kind of lost interest after a while
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3 RespuestasEditado por Goomy: 5/29/2017 7:29:48 PMThe editing was top notch with few mistakes, and the void portal was a good idea. However, the pacing was slow and the single song combined with it got me bored in no time. [spoiler]-1 point for the dab[/spoiler]
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2 Respuestas#MOTW nice work only this is if you like feedback you could have it a bit faster pace
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I liked it good video
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6 RespuestasNot a fan of the music choice but the editing was spot on. 9/10
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1 RespuestaKeep up the great work!
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1 RespuestaVideo was slow paced because there was no real interesting parts. Watching you run around really was not exciting at all. There needs to be some pull, something interesting that draws your viewer's attention. Editing was good, transition ideas worked well. Just need to find something that makes me (the viewer) not lose interest. Tell a story. Show off something interesting. Transition into audio that enhances the experience at each scene.
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1 RespuestaI expected a map breaking video but this was way better. Great work
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5 RespuestasSeeing as how I have zero video making ability, I'm not going to sit here and pick the video apart. I appreciate the time and effort, the cool idea, and that it wasn't another PvP montage. The void grenade transitions were really nicely done! Great job dude.
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1 RespuestaEditado por Xenomorph: 5/30/2017 9:02:21 AMWas expecting to see a Hunter going somewhere only a Hunter could really get to (with Bones). Left wondering why you couldn't just go to those places with any class instead of a Hunter. Maybe work on the title, make it relevant to the video. Also, some timing was a bit off. Could have switched to a lot more places (top of Felwinters Peak for one), there are so many places you could cut to in quick succession (CoE arenas, CoO encounters, Strike/Mission encounters etc)... Really made it a "travel montage" where people would go: "Skolas!, Urzok! etc etc"... Just my thoughts though. Hope this was constructive.
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1 RespuestaThat was dope. The swipes on the arcblade should have taken you to a different planet like you did with the nightstalker but it was nice all in all. I would love to be apart of something like this but your on Xbox. Also what cloak is that?
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1 RespuestaThat Titan in the last exit scene is sexy af!!
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I hated the void grenade portal attempt and I expecially hated how the blade dancer's swings match the music
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Its trash, stop making them
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Do you ever ask your self if anyone really want to watch your videos? 90% of people have better things to do. Such as work and family! Do you understand that?
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1 RespuestaI don't get the purpose of the video.
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1 RespuestaKip: "It's pretty cool, I guess"
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2 RespuestasSo terrible i didnt and wont bother watching it
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Nice fake bro, good work
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