Guys how is this character build so far?

class: Warlock name: liekos race: Exo gender: male Kal was an Exo created in a base far beyond the wall. This is where he learned to hone his skills and become a better warrior. This is also where he developed his self awareness. But the question was who really created him. Where was he originally from. Could he be connected to traveler and some sort of way. What purpose was he really created for. To strike fear in others maintain control. He knew that no human has the advances in science and technology to create something like him. He knew he would have to find the answers himself. "Where are you going Liekos ?" His mastered asked in a questioning tone. "Away from this place." The Exo replied. "Who really created me, where am I from, why am I here?" 
"You and your kind where found in the mist of the traveler."
"Wait you mean there are more like me."
"Plenty."
"What else can you tell me ?"
"Nothing else really, I'm an old man, all I've done the past 15 years is watch you grow; Into a fine warrior. If you seek more answers you must venture out on your own."
"Thank you master."
"Don't thank me boy all Iv'e done was record." He said in a chuckled voice. "Now go guardian, and forge your destiny."