one upon a time there was a sponge that was sooo ugly, everyone died. the end :)

Here's my story. Tell me what you guys think. Zack had a long day at school. It was Friday, and the start of another weekend. He was ready to just relax at home. Eventually, Zack got home. The first thing he did was start up his Xbox. "Time to own some noobs," he said when he popped in his Halo game disk. Zack them saw the menu and selected Matchmaking. But when he pressed the A button on his controller, he was covered in fear! Zack had recieved the biggest scare of his life! It was...a matchmaking ban. THE END

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EvilTurkey1021 Cernel Joson [/quote] [u][b]Colonel...[/u][/b]

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] eddymon 117 I've got a pretty good ghost story. There was a guy who worked in a forest as a lumberjack. Every day he would ride his motorcycle to this forest to cut trees down and then he would go home again. So one day there was this huge storm. After cutting down all the trees he needed to cut down, he got on his bike and started driving home. About half way home he noticed a woman walking down the street. She looked about 25 or 30. Anyway she looked absolutely drenched in water and she was all pale and shivery. So the guy pulls up next to her and says, "Hey you look cold. Shall i drive you home?" "Oh, yes please." she replies. So she gets on the back of his bike. He starts driving. "WHERE DO YOU LIVE?" He shouts through the wind and rain. She tells him her address. So he focuses on the road and soon enough he gets her to the street she lives on. He pulls up to the house number she told him to before. He gets off his bike but when he looks at the back of his bike there is no one on it. He thought that she must have fallen off the back. He drives back to where he picked her up and all the way back to her house, but he doesn't find her. He rings her doorbell. An old lady opens the door. "Hello?" She says. So the guy explains what happened. "You must be mistaken young man." The old woman says. "Mistaken?" The guy says. "Well yes." Says the old woman. "My daughter died 5 years ago." [/quote] This story plot is SO overused...

your mother shes short and scary (LOL just jokeing)

*gasp* *loud thud*

this is a true story first my cousin told me this that happend to her i made it into a story in first person i woke up late at night i was too lazy to check my clock,i was suddenly thirsty i got up lazily to get a drink,there was something wrong about tonight, something....different i went to look out the huge window in the living room i looked out and saw someone run across the road i stayed quiet for a couple of seconds when i heard breathing...soft....slow,it turned more harsher and louder i heard the sound from behind me,i look and walk towards the sound, it came from the back door,my heart beats faster i see the back window clouded by the cold ,i look at it so more when i see a face eyes black,horns, it stares at me eyes wide,i run for my parents room , shaking in fear and in a cracked voice i tell them what happend,my father woke up he gets up his eyes wide open goes to his closet a grabs his rifle,he gets out of the room,i wait for a couple of minutes waiting for a shot but instead he comes back with my sisters,my dad leaves with my mom i get out of the room again i go with him and i hear the heavy breathing,i see the devilish face again,and hits the door repeatdly my dad yells "get out!!" it walks away hearing heavy foot steps my dad rushes it opening the door shoots twice we hear laughter and cries and yells of women ,infants,and men,we all rush into the house , and then when we hear noises from our basement breathing and cries of agony,my dad closes the door to the basement and calls the police they get here in a few short minutes we tell them what happend,we urged them to go downstairs and check it out,they repeat once again no,but they say that they will stay in the house until morning and get our priest,i went into the room where my sisters are in we all sleep hearing the voices...i wake up to my dad getting up to go to the kitchen ,the priest comes in my dad tell him what happend an hour later the police and the priest check downstairs...nothing,they purify the house and tell us you should be safe for the night and leave....i wake up again to the heavy breathing and giggles,my little sister gone ,i get up to go to the door downstairs,i see my little sister climbing down,i go down but then a head pops and makes me stop terrified i go back to the room,wide awake i hear my sister's giggles and the monster... well end of story they moved out a week later and move across town,i was there before that happend,i then heard a talking from the woods in english we are from a french town no one speaks that good in english i may not be as good as a writer but deal with it, ohh and her sister is fine. i am native just to tell you we have our own legends,like this story of the monster...was told that a demon could turn into any being and mimic others voices and killed many people including children,women,and men,it can't be killed,and haunts evil spots(like a place where someone has been murdered and etc.) it cannot hurt you if you do a little ruitual. the rest are short and was told by my friends probably not real,not some copy&paste [b]The Boy[/b] a little boy was playing with his little cars enjoying the day outside,his mother was cleaning the house,a boy came out of some big rocks ,he started talking to the boy"hey come here i got alot of cars here and some candy!come one i'll show you" mmm...ok let me just asked my mom " mommy can i go play with this boy?" hmm...how about you show me who he is and i will tell you if you can play with him ok" "ok mommy" the boy and the mother went out side but did'nt know which one the boy was " how did this boy look like?" "he had green eyes and was in a white shirts with red all over on him,with one ear".... apparently a boy went missing and was found dead along the woods [b]only one[/b] a babysitter went to a house to watch some bratty kids. she did'nt know it was in the woods ,she was told some things she did'nt bother to listen too only about their bedtime,and allergies,it was nearly bedtime but they weren't going to bed instead they were laughing making loud noises and not being quiet,the babysitter got too stressed out and went outside, a few minutes later she saw something some 150ft away she could'nt make out because of the dark it came at her,runnning real fast it was huge and only then sis she realised it was dangerous because it roared,she rushed back into the house locked and closed the door,it was bashing the door,soon it was in the house she grabbed the youngest that couldn't walk,by that time it was trying to knocked the room door down ,she opened the window to get out she tried to help the other kids but when she got out the door was down one kid was about to get out but was grabbed she ran to her car,hearing screams and gurgling,she started her car and left,only then she realized that you need to stay quiet at 8:00 and not make much noise,it was 8:18.... this was a story my mom told me to keep me quiet,when i was getting ready to bed when i was younger,the beast was big foot. [b]the summer[/b] a famliy were going camping for the summer in a cabin somewhere 30 miles away from town,they had to drive and conoe to get to the cabin the father,the mother,a brother,and a sister were part of the family,soon they were running out of resources,only enough to last for 4 days,the parents were going to leave for a day to get them,the sister and brother stayed behind they waited for a day then two days,. finally on the forth day a canoe was coming toward them,in was sunset so they could'nt see when to canoe got closer they realized there was only 1 person,closer than before,there was blood all over the man,the sister than said to the older brother "Run!"they ran ,the boy went into the house and hid under the bed,while the sister ran into the forest, the boy heard footsteps in the cabin,searching for him,checking cabinets,soon the footsteps stepped out,a few hours later he heard his sisters screams fpor the entire night... the parents got home on the 5th day sober,they don't see the kids they looks around the house and finally find the boy under the bed,the try to get him out of there,an hour passes by but he still won't come out, a few more hours later he finally comes out shakened,he tells them what happend an hour later they go out to find his sister,the dad goes out on himself while the brother and the mother go together,an hour later he finds a camp he sees drak patches of blood every where a fire going on,then he sees his daughter head on a spear,bones scattered everywhere,he finds the man sleeping near the fire,he picks up a stick and stabs the stick into his head and puts him in the fire... told by my cousin nothing special took me an hour and a half to write this

This thread reminds me very much of "Tales of the Crypt keeper", that old cartoon series

once upon a time, a mad scientist made a zombie BRAAAAAINS I <#3 INFECTION but now an actual story a boy i know at school once had a pet dog, max. now max was alwaysd niffing at objects, but one day he sniffed too much. he was with my friend in a field when he started barking and ran off after something. my friend spent the rest of the day looking for him. he found him three weeks later tied to a tree. he was dead, and he had been mutilated. they took him to the taxidermist to get stuffed. when they cut him open they found a note buried in his brain. it said"IF ANYONE GOES ON MY PROPERTY AGAIN I WILL KILL EVERYONE WITHIN SEVEN MILES OF MY HOUSE. STAY OFF." :0

but now a real story: a boy whose name was steel and his last name was boom not pylon started a thread on bungie.net in the flood. while he was watching the thread grow to become the best in bungie, :) he failed to notice a small spiderlike creature crawl into his room. that night while he slept, it moved from his hiding place and crawled inside his ear. the it broke his eardrum and went into his brain. after several moments of twitching its legs, it found the correct spot to control his body. then, with inhuman strength, it killed his entire family and several others until the police were called. then when they shot at the body, it just absorbed the bullets. then when they blew off his arm, he used the broken bone stump to crush several officers. when they started aiming for his head, the spiderlike creature left and escaped. coincidentally, in went to the house of a boy named T, last name Moneyzz, where he failed to notice it crawling into his room while he was typing this. but seriously i just looked over my shoulder for real. god i gave MYSELF nightmares and i wrote the story. :s ZOMG GET ME SOME RAID ASAP PLZZZ!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaasfshkjyrk it gotted me :( [Edited on 05.06.2009 8:01 PM PDT]

lol sounds like arby n the chief to me lolers

[b] Pictures One day, a girl was assigned a project for her photography class. She was to go out into the wilderness and take as many pictures as possible. So, she decided she'd camp out instead of just go and take some pictures. She loved nature and the outdoors, and wasn't afraid of spending the night alone out in the woods. So, she packed up everything she needed for the trip and set off. She had a great time take pictures, and really enjoyed herself photographing the woods she was camping in. That night, she went to bed, and slept soundly. She woke up, gathered her things, and went back home. She used up four rolls of film, and decided to get them developed A.S.A.P. After having the photos developed, she returned to the store to get them back. "Everything went fine, here are your photos ma'am." "Thank you." "Just one thing..." "What is that?" "There were 4 photos missing. One from each roll." "How odd." "Yes, but we did find them eventually. Would you like to see them?" "Yes, please." The man showed her the pictures, and after seeing them, she dropped her pictures, screamed, and ran home. She never went anywhere alone after that day. Those 4 photos were of her, asleep in her tent. [/b]

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Dream053 "The World Ends This Christmas" Santa has eaten every cookie in the universe... and mankind can no longer manufacture them... The end.[/quote] lol

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] T Moneyzz but now a real story: a boy whose name was steel and his last name was boom not pylon started a thread on bungie.net in the flood. while he was watching the thread grow to become the best in bungie, :) he failed to notice a small spiderlike creature crawl into his room. that night while he slept, it moved from his hiding place and crawled inside his ear. the it broke his eardrum and went into his brain. after several moments of twitching its legs, it found the correct spot to control his body. then, with inhuman strength, it killed his entire family and several others until the police were called. then when they shot at the body, it just absorbed the bullets. then when they blew off his arm, he used the broken bone stump to crush several officers. when they started aiming for his head, the spiderlike creature left and escaped. coincidentally, in went to the house of a boy named T, last name Moneyzz, where he failed to notice it crawling into his room while he was typing this. but seriously i just looked over my shoulder for real. god i gave MYSELF nightmares and i wrote the story. :s ZOMG GET ME SOME RAID ASAP PLZZZ!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaasfshkjyrk it gotted me :([/quote] Who let you in here?

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EvilTurkey1021 John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway. John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy." Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS" There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons. "This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!" So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall. "HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons "I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill. "No! I must kill the demons" he shouted The radio said "No, John. You are the demons" And then John was a zombie.[/quote] stories are good. english is better.

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] steelboom490 This is my 2nd Short Stories thread. This thread will have some stories from the books "Scary Stories to tell in the Dark" and "More Scary Stories to tell in the Dark" (Some of my favorite books when i was younger) These stories have been re-worded by me to fit into this thread, since the original are a at least a few pages long. Enjoy. [quote]The Big Toe A boy was digging at this edge of his family's garden when he saw a toe poking out from the dirt. He tried to dig it out of the dirt, but it was stuck to something. The boy gave a great tug and the toe came out of the ground. He then heard a groan and something scamper away. he showed the toe to his mom. She said, "This'll be great to add to the soup tonight." So, the mother cut the toe into 3 pieces and put them into the soup. Later that night, after the boy ate supper, he felt tired and went to bed. he was awakened at midnight by a groaning in the street. "Where is my to-o-o-o-o-e?" it groaned. The boy got very scared. But he thought, "He doesn't know where I am, it won't find me." Then the groan again, but it was in front of his house. "Where is my to-o-o-o-o-e?" the boy tried to sleep, he thought it was just his imagination. But then he heard the front door open, and he heard the groan again. "Where is my to-o-o-o-o-e?" The boy heard footsteps slowly move through the kitchen into the dining room, then into the living room. He then heard footsteps slowly climbing the stairs. Closer the footsteps came. They were right outside his door. "Where is my to-o-o-o-o-e?" The do0or opened. The boy was shaking with fear. He listened as the footsteps moved closer through the dark room to his bed. Then they stopped. "Where is my to-o-o-o-o-e?" The voice groaned...[/quote] The next few posts will be made by me, they are were future stories will be. I'm not trying to bump this thread, I'm only making it so that you can see more stories on this first page. [/quote] That's from Scary Stories.

[i]There once was a little girl who wandered the dark streets alone,a creepy looking dude came and kidnapped her. and when the police found her body,they said she had been raped.............................100000000000000 times in the mouth. The end[/i] [Edited on 05.28.2009 8:56 AM PDT]

This is one my friend wrote in an English exam. One time there was this guy who was hiking around on a hill in Scotland. It was quite foggy but he still wanted to get to the top. He walked and walked untill after a while, the fog went away, but it started to thunder. Then it started to rain. After a few minutes the rain got quite heavy. He got out his mobile phone (or cell phone whatever you want to call it) and tried to phone his wife, hoping she could pick him up somehow. There was no signal. He started running, to see if he could find a tree. He saw something in the distance, and upon looking harder, he saw that it was a small wooden house, like a shack. There was light coming from the windows, but the curtains were closed. He though that there might be someone inside who could give him some shelter until the rain stopped. He got closer, and closer until everything went black. A month later he woke up in a hospital, not knowing who he was. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I thought it was an amazing story. Especially for an exam.

Once again I'll post this story again because it was so far back that nobody probably seen it. "Escape From Torment" Chapter I: Rude Awakening You are Carlos Trevor, a Junior in high school. You have it all, friends, passing grades, a job. Everything except for knowledge of torment which lies ahead... It has been an exhausting day at Salius High, tests every class with the thought of relaxation in your home ahead. Chattering about people, events, and television shows with your best friend, Joey Buddson, you see your parents pull out from the driveway. As sunlight flashes across your face, they explain that they're leaving for a Pennsylvania vacation for three days. You, seventeen-year old Carlos Trevor are now in charge of the house until they return. The house is painted white, also has flower and shrub before it. There is a maple tree to the right that you remember playing around at a young age and the area is sub-urban. Your friend, Joey, asks if he can stay for a while and you accept. You stay outside for a moment to watch your parents drive away then you enter the house. The flooring is fresh wooden plank with tan walls around. You proceed ahead to the kitchen which Joey is already heading down into the basement without you. You open the freezer to take out hot pockets. While waiting for them to warm, You search for a bag of pringles chips and a two- litter bottle of sprite. You carry the food and beverage down into the basement where Joey waits on a couch before a television. To your surprise, he has a new movie called "Escape From Torment" which someone left behind in a hurry. You set everything down on a coffee table and relax as the movie begins. Watching it, you notice it unique by being shot from a camera. It starred a teenaged female character named Kellia who was stalked by Torment. Kellia wore a light-black jacket and had medium legnth orange hair. Torment was a mutant creature with four arms, a split jaw, and tentacles. The creature could lay eggs inside people which would tear thier way out from the body and feast upon it after hatching. Torment's first appearance was concealed away behind a large, black coat with even the face hidden behind a hood. The creature had rarely revailed it's true nature and always kept to the shadows. In the end Kellia had managed to escape through the use of a subway tunnel and although Torment had gotten hit by a train, it never truely died. By now the sky is dark and stormy when Joey leaves. You start changing the channel to regular programming when you hear creaking above you. You dismiss it as Joey grabbing food or using the bathroom. Soon you become tired and require sleep but first you need to use the bathroom. You lazily get up and after shutting off power to the television, head upstairs. Along the way, you get an eerie feeling of being watched but manage to dismiss it. Finally after the bathroom break you can head upstairs to rest. You proceed through the kitchen to open another wooden door which one might assume to be a pantry just as the wooden basement door. It's not a pantry but actually leading to a staircase as you already know. You ascend the staircase and open the wooden door atop it. From here, your room is straight ahead but you must keep turnning lights off along the way. Finally, you reach the room and leave your current clothing on as you're just that tired. As you begin falling asleep, you begin hearing footsteps which seem to grow louder with each passing one. You stare at your also wooden bedroom door to see it slowly creak open. A black, shadowy figure squeezes through and you awaken terrified. Suddenly, you hear a crash come from downstairs and you cautiously get out of bed...

"Escape From Torment" Chapter II: Terrorization Slowly, you proceed forward with your heart beating faster upon each individual step. You strain against the fear of checking out the sound for the nightmare could be real. Slowly but surely you overcome that fear and dismiss the thought that such a thing could possibly exist. Opening the wooden kitchen door you notice glass shattered against the wooden floor and the wooden basement door open. Quite alot of wood you notice but then again, it just is. As you approach the door, a shadow ascends and you recoil. To your luck, it's Joey and sure enough he explains that he dropped something by accident while returning to take the movie back. Without notice, a serpent- like tentacle crawls up the basement stairs and constricts Joey. You try your best to free him but the tentacle pulls him down into the darkness. With a deep breath you chase down after him to assist, nothing on the way down unlike the fear suggests. Instead, all terror is proven false when you look around to find nothing. Heard around the basement is light moaning, you search around near crates stacked up to find Joey curled up on the dusty floor. You assist him up and help him up the stairs much like a true friend would. Joey makes an atempt of walking unassisted when he falls over into the living room, at least he is living. Suddenly, You rush over to help him up when you hear a horrific-monstorous growl from the basement but are afraid that if you leave Joey be, he may not survive. Without warning the power goes out and the house is left in darkness with only flashes of lightning which would break it. Peeking into the kitchen, one flash reveals the same black figure from the nightmare slowly approaching. With the next flash, it's gone and you start to panic. It's only when Joey shifts that you stop feeling afraid. You hear Joey slowly rise and ask what had just ocurred. You explain how you helped him up here and now you ask him to follow your lead; the only way out is to stick together. You and Joey walk into the kitchen in search of a flashlight. Not only should it repel the creature but also provide sight. You find batteries and hand them over to Joey who found the flashlight. In a moment you can see by the shine of it but fail to see the black-clothed figure. You would figure that as large as it is that the thing would just attack already. It is only when you turn to Joey to comment on the situation that you get another eerie feeling. You slowly turn to see the creature towering above you. Still with fright, you notice that the creature wields a long, half- red blade and prepares to strike when Joey uses a combination of attacks to save your life. Joey shines the flashlight into the creatures hood which seems to boil through and make it stumble back which leaves Joey with the open option to kick the thing back down into the basement. Together, you and Joey both descend willingly after it to end this nightmare, it would not stop until dealt with. Unfortunately, it is once again nowhere to be found. You still look around though, persistance is always good for getting something done here and now. You check the VCR on the television set to see if "Escape from Torment" is still in there. Sure enough that it is and also sure enough that once you pull it out that the creature from the movie should be sighted again. This time however, is unlike others as the creature's inhuman face can be seen from a mile away. You at least wish it was a mile away, it was anything close to a bulked- up neck of a turkey. That "neck" hung over itself the reveal a jaw split into four individual sections. Perhaps even worse was it's temprer after Joey's previous actions. A number of serpent- like tentacles bursted out from all possible sides and swarmed around itself to protect from flashlight attacks. You think to yourself: all we need now is some dramatic music...

"Escape From Torment" Chapter III: False Hope It's about now that you reconsider the whole fighting thing because if you stayed, you would probably die. Lucky is having a passage behind the stairs leading to the other side of this basement. The other side meaning where you found Joey after he had gotten pulled down here. Unlucky is having serpent- like tentacles chase you the entire way; if there were to be a nomination for persistance, Torment would achieve it. Among the many crates, only one stands out among others. There seems to be an odd shape marking the wall behing it, more metallic than concrete. An idea formulates in your head and you ask Joey if he can assist in pushing the crate away from it's spot on the wall. You both quietly approach the crate as tentacles slide around above, searching for targets to dismember. Once the crate's moved, you realize that the shape's actually a hidden metallic door. Another monstorous growl is heard but louder than before. Joey shines his flashlight around to see torment standing tall with all focus on the annihilation of you and your friend; this shall be one image never to ever escape your mind. Joey tries to burn the mutant creature with the flashlight's shine but is surprised when a tentacle whacks the tool away. You try the metallic door but it's locked, it's suddenly that you formulate another idea. While Joey runs off to find his lost tool, you stand before the door long enough to not only distract the creature but use it. Torment sends a tentacle in fast to tear into you but with a doge, goes through the door instead. Now Joey has his flashlight and manages to keep Torment stuned long enough for you to unlock the metallic door; you use the hole for bypassing to the opposite side. Both you and Joey escape through the now- open door in an attempt to abandon the creature. It seems truely like the movie suggests: this is the escape from torment, complete and utterly. You both quickly kick open a secondary metallic door deeper inside and close it behind you. You are both overcome with relief while walking through this new dark, rotten, unpleasant concrete passage with the only scent being that of a sewer. The only lightsource is Joey's flashlight and unfortunate it is that the passage looks like it ends ahead. Relief comes only from the fact that the passage takes a turn right and then left to continue its direction as if to avoid something. Your slow speed quickens as heavy footfall is heard behind you, only one thing which it could come from. Your heart races faster and faster as you quickly sprint through a long hall; the sight of a hole along the floor before the dead end ahead awaits your arrival. You reach that goal and drop down to a completely unknown location; unknown to you at least. All lighting is dimmed down as darkness shrouds around the corners of the room. The room is shaped like a half- cut cylinder, something much like an aircraft hangar or perhaps a greenhouse. There's only a wall behind you but before you is a distance for you to proceed across. At the end is what appears to been a ninety degree drop. You approach that drop with the scent of sewage only to see that this drop works like a waterfall for sewage to arrive at a lower level. You hear cracking and snaping on the cieling behind you, you already know what to expect. A portion of the ceiling collapses and dust scatters the blind your vision. When the effect clears, Torment emerges from remaining dust particles which circulates fresh debris. You back away and come closer and closer to the edge. This gives you one last idea to formulate itself inside you mind. The creature readies its tentacles and blade as you quietly tell Joey your plan. It's all too sudden that Torment charges towards you but then again, you were ready for this. As the creature nears you, you quickly dodge out of the way soon enough to see Torment drop over the edge as planed. It's only one way to deal with a problem that you would wash it away down a river of sewage. With that taken care of, you command Joey to follow and proceed toward a metallic door off to your right. The new are seems to be a hall which leads left and down metallic stairs. It seems to be a metallic catwalk all in all; pipes run along its side on the right which is lit only by a reddish glow. All you hear is the hum of machinery, it's obviously a side passage. You follow its legnth and arrive before an aperature which casts a glow of light upon the catwalk. You proceed through the opening to arrive atop a passage running aside the river of sewage. The problem is that it fails to lead in one single dirrection, it's a practical labyrinth. It's here that even through the horrid scent of flowing sewage that seems peaceful? No, mostly it's the fear that Torment will be right around the next corner and this entire journey would turn into a chase. What feels like an eternity passes and you finally notice an accessable ladder. You climb up first and work to push the manhole cover away but must climb back down to let Joey try. Of course he is able to get the job done and is first to escape to the streets above; you climb second and as if your life depends on it. Atop the street above, you put the cover back into place and take a deep breath of fresh nightime air. What's eerie about the streets is that no vehicles are driving around. Not so odd because it's nighttime but still eerie You notcie just how far that journey was as you live in the sub- urban area outside the city and yet now you're right inside the city with tall structures towering around you. You see a subway entrance and figure it's better than another long walk. You and Joey proceed towards the subway entrance and descend the still well- lit concrete stairs. As you go to purchase tickets, life returns to the area and people crowd around. Luckily for Joey, you have extra cash to spare and both with tickets, you wait in line. Finally after what feels like another eternity, the train arrives. One problem is that the train seems so empty and lifeless upon arriveal but when you board it, the car becomes crowded. In your seat, it's not long before the doors close but even as crowded as it is, people seem so quiet. As the train begins moving, you feel some relief but that dies when something large seems to fly across the window opposite of you. Suddenly, the train shakes violently and everyone panics; it's only when you realize what's happening that everything fades black...

"Escape from Torment" Chapter IV: Derailment Vison slowly returns in a blur but not to the peaceful sight you wanted. The area is dim and dark with only sparks and fire to brighten you line of sight. All that surrounds you is people in thier seats; some are luckily just badly wounded or unconcious, everyone else is dead. You remember who you are and what had caused this. It was not just a train ride, it was a death trap. You hear Joey in pain and get out of your seat to find him. Once found, you are surprised because he is intact but still in pain for some odd reason. You assist Joey out from his seat and walk down to an exit door; here you must force it open alone. Fire spreads rapidly and you continue forcing open the door. You and Joey both escape seconds away from disaster and the entire train car lights up into flames. Outside the train wreck, Joey equips his flashlight and shines it around. The familiar sense of eerieness returns as you hear a metallic object fall from behind you and turn to see only the train which completely blocks off that direction of travel. You then hear footsteps coming from the darkness of the only available direction which frightens Joey enough to make him lose grip of the flashlight. You almost want to laugh with relief when it turns out to be a female which reminds you of someone for some reason. She wears a light- black jacket and medium legnth orange hair. She introduces herself as Kellia and is about the explain more but you respond that you know already. She insists and explains how her journey was recorded by a friend as she was hunted by torment. Kellia asks a quick question if you've seen Torment's true form yet and before you can respond, you hear the all- too familiar horrific growl coincidentally. You turn around to see it in its true nature atop the flaming train wreck. With a short pause, Kellia suggests a simple plan, run. Without a look behind, you all start sprinting down the tunnel with only joey to light the way. After the exhausting run you, Joey, and Kellia all pull off to the convenient door on the left. The room is pitch black which is broken only by Joey's flashlight. The room appears to be rusty and full of dust; it's a few minutes that the panic ends to slight peacefulness. You look where the flashlight shines and think you can see an old- broken generator when the peace suddenly changes. Joey quickly falls to his knees in intense pain and announces all of it. A pain that starts in his stomach and rises to a shoulder. Blood sprays out from his neck and a claw pierces through. The last thing Joey experiences is some kind of mutant parasite tear its way out and all fades black. You, Carlos, hear Kellia comment that the egg grew and hatched; a sad notice that Torment's actually female. You search around for the parasite and find no luck; you only wonder where the origonal creature originated from. With disapointment, you rest you back to the door you entered from. Suddenly, a serpent- like tentacle pierces through the door, wraps around you, and pulls you away as all once again fades. you awaken again in a blur as Kellia's face gains relief. To your side, torment somehow lies dead on the tracks and you grab Kellia's hand to be pulled to your feet. you both begin walking away when you hear something shift. You turn around to see the creature get back up and prepare for an attack. Thankfully, an unexpected train arrives and avenges the one you came in on by passing you two but traveling right through torment. Sunrise brightens the sky as both you and Kellia arrive before your suburban home. Kellia explains that the film you watched was filmed by Kennith, a name you recognize from school. Kennith had met the same unfortunate fate that Joey had recently experienced. With that, you watch as Kellia walks off into the sunrise and you think about just how easily it happened for you; it was Kellia who actually brought Torment down not once but twice. You think of this as an intense pain starts in your stomach and rises to a shoulder... So what did everyone think, what's your opinions?

I think that was a very, very good story.

OMG!

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] A FLYING PAN Here is a story. I wrote this myself. But sadly I do not have a name yet! There was a family who certainly were not hurting for money. Well it was there 8 year old son's birthday. So they decided to take him shopping in the city. It was a very busy day as usual. Well when the boy had all of his gifts they were going down to the subway to get across the city. The family went on their train to get across the subway. They got off the train and headed for the elevators. When the doors opened there were many people in there already. They were all adults who were fairly big fellows. The boy darted into the elevator leaving behind his parents. the parents tried to get in the elevator but it was to late the elevator doors closed and was heading right on up. The parents rode on up on the other elevator the same time the boy went up. When the doors opened they thought they would meet their son. Well they didn't see him anywhere in the crowd. In fact they didn't even see him get off the elevator. So the parents looked all over through the crowds but did not find their son. They quickly called the cops and they arrived very quickly. A detective was sent on the case. First thing to do was to check the elevator. The detective found a button and showed it to the boys parents. They agreed that it was their son's button from his shirt. Next thing was the detective did was watch all of the security camera recordings. He obviously went to watch the elevator camera's recording first. He saw the big man and all the other people who surrounded him. He also saw the boy enter the elevator. After that he couldn't see much because a person got in front of the camera. He watched the camera that showed everyone filing out of the elevator. But there was no sign of the boy leaving the elevator still. He thought he knew the big bearded man in the elvator with the boy from somewhere. He did some research and found out who the man was. He was a man who went on a expedition to Antarctica. They lost communication and had to survive. Many of his friends had died and they ran short of food. so they had to eat his friends to live. The other people in the elevator were also survivors in the man's group. They also resorted to cannibalism to live. The detective decided to meet with man. He easily found his address. He lived in the city so it was not hard to find him. The detective had an interview with the man. " So were you on an elevator on the day of November 12th?" the detective asked. "Yes I was" Said the bearded man. "Did you happen to see a little boy in the elevator riding up with you?". "Yes I did, he was all alone. I'm surprised his parents weren't with him." " Yes well um, did you ever see him leave the elevator by any chance?" " I don't think I did, I was one of the first people out and there was a pretty big crowd." " Ok because that little boy has turned up missing and was reported not coming out of the elevator." "Yes well that is quite sad and I wish I could help but I didn't see him leave myself." "Well thankyou for your time." "I'll do anything to help, oh and by the way check out my book I wrote from when me and my crew had to survive in Antarctica. I think it isn't to bad for a book I wrote." "I'll be sure to do that thanks." The detective left and went to the library to pick up the man's book. The detective read the book in the next few days. The book was about how hard it was to live. It said how many of his best friends died on that trip and how they were like his brothers. But the only way to live was to eat the corpses of his dead friends. It was a horrible feeling he said but he wuld do anything to have the sweet taste of life. After reading the book that afternoon he replayed all the footage in the elevator. He studied the man and all of his friends. Something just didn't feel write about this. He watched all of them walk out but still not the boy. He slowly played the footage and he saw a cane in one of the person's hand. He also saw a ball in the other man's hand. All of them were wearing backpacks for some odd reason. Thats when it clicked! What if the big man and all of his crew were still cannibals. They proably didn't like the fact of eating someone at first to live. But what if they got use to it and eventually started to enjoy it? He studied the camera footage one last time and thought how much that cane looked like a leg or arm. Or how that oval ball looked like a foot. Sadly he couldn't really see if it was or wasn't and could not get enough evidence. But what he thought was crazy is how there was not one drop on blood in the elevator![/quote] I've read that story in a book before, don't steal stories ...

Very Scary!