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[i]*Continued from above.*[/i] [b]”Hey! Don’t you touch him!”[/b] Lock fixed his gaze on the smaller Dreg, both his arms now fighting to push Vahn off him. However Vahn had placed a second hand on Lock’s chest and had him firmly pinned against the door. [b]”[Curses Vahn!]”[/b] Despite Sky’s protests, she remained where she was. [b]”[Let him go!]”[/b] She knew better than to physically intervene. They were friends sure, but the Fallen respected rank more than anything else. With four arms, Vahn was king. She laid a hand on him and his Dreg army would tear her to pieces… if he allowed it. [b]”[Open door!]”[/b] [b]”I can’t open this damn door! The window closed! Your Winter fools failed to cut power to the Prison. The plan fell apart before we even started and you’re too dumb to understand that!”[/b] Vahn roared, Ether hissed through the open ports of his mask, and two solid fists were loosed. They sprinted at Lock’s face… but never found their target. The prison had interrupted with a terrible scream. A sound like an explosion followed by metal grating against metal filled the air and tore at the ear drums of Fallen and Awoken alike. Before any of them could react, the prison itself jumped with such force that everyone was knocked to the ground. Vahn fell backwards, his four arms flapping pathetically at the air in an attempt to right himself. Lock dropped to the floor but managed to find his footing while his ears adjusted the noise. It was reduced to a dull buzz in the background. Everyone else however... While they fought to ignore the piercing song, Lock clamored toward the closest window to try and find the source, struggling to keep upright against the unpredictable bucking of the prison. Steps forward were pained and awkward with the last landing him rather hard against the small glass hole in the wall. He peered outside before immediately regretting his decision. Outside, a second Ketch had entered Awoken space and fell out of warp... directly inside the walls of the prison. The result was catastrophic. Shields were immediately destroyed and with their destruction, the wave of debris that was created by the violent collision began a journey unhindered. Colony ships, shuttles, containers and an asteroid that happened to be nearby were shredded and turned into shrapnel. Lock watched in horror as the dense cloud of projectiles began to pepper those floors closest to the impact site. Chunks of metal were sent flying into more metal, tearing off larger pieces and hurling each one into space. Within a handful of seconds, the level that was once Cypher's was itself turned into a cloud of death that continued the "domino effect". A couple seconds after that and the lower levels went dark. Power to the prison had been successfully cut. The House of Winter had just opened their window. --- [i]"Mayday...mayday...mayday… 1...9...6...5...Sierra...Echo…5...Astraea… 4...Vesta... Mayday...Papa...Echo...Walls are breached by Fallen... Say again...Designate siege...Charlie... Foxtrot… Over… … … … … … … … … … … … … 4...Vesta to...1...9...6...5...Sierra...Echo...5...Astraea… Designate siege...Charlie... Foxtrot on...Papa...Echo by Fallen read… Quebec of Ceres...Consent...Consent…. IPM...Alpha...ETA...5 DOCs… Over." Continued in [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/93093527/0/0]Chapter Four or The Second Floor[/url][/i]
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  • Wanted to do a quick update across all my chapters for anyone who is following: [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/93093527/0/0]Chapter Four[/url] is out and Chapter Five is on it's way. Ideas are being smoothed out and words are hitting paper. Should only be a few days at the most (A bit busy irl with work and fam). Anyways I know there are only a few of you but thanks for following! Means a lot to able to push out a story even if only a few read it. Let me know what you guys think of Chapter four and stay tuned for more!

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  • Awesome job man! Your writing has improved with each piece you've written. I can't wait to read the next part!

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  • Thanks haha. It's definitely a learning process and I know I still have a lot to improve on.

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  • lolwtf man - you need to hurry up with the next part - like - seriously hahaha - for real that was an awesome read - cant wait to see the next part -

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  • Glad you enjoyed it! Chapter four is almost done so you won't have to wait very long to continue on this journey.

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  • What are you waiting for? Keep writing!!

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  • WOW!!! Man, this keeps getting better with every entry! I love to see Fallen and Exos/Awoken having to work together, and the rivalries between Fallen leaders. Can´t wait for part 4! I´ll put this in the thread in a few minutes. Updating the thread is starting to be complicated, but it´s oh so worth it.

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