lol Thanks!

Your welcome [spoiler]I need to get better at writing stories. I only write lore[/spoiler]

Just keep writing and you'll get better! :)

Yeah, I'm a lot better than I was seven years ago. Want a sample ?

Yeah, sure, I'll read whatever you've got!

Alright what I have so far for my sci fi fantasy world. As in the story [spoiler] humanity is starting to explore space with our friends the deves. using magic and technology to break through the dona solar system, but there are dangerous creatures and races outside our solar system, not to mention the six prime evil races. the prime evils are races that have unlimited power.the gore an endless,army wanting to control more than the hanna galaxy. the val quni want to become gods and are willing to do anything to reach that level. the dark knights just appears out of nowhere. They look to old to be a new race in the universe, their magic is too old. we have only seen dark walkers marching through cities. then there are the soulless, they go through solar systems destroying worlds and races. the predcos are not robots nor are they organics. somehow they are both. they have never been one or the other. but then there are the broken ones, they are the myth that is told when children don't want to eat the veggies. my name is Chris and i am a star explorer, as a star explorer it is my job to explore the stars. Looking for new worlds to live on and trade with friendly alien races. I am the captain of six man crew, we are going to a new solar system called sulga, from reports by our self aware a.I. name elza. (Ecex are a.I that have bodies that can actually touch objects , they are able to feel emotions thanks to the souls they are given.) She said The planet is good enough to colonize. I ask elza how long would it take. Elza replies " it is a two day trip, are you sure you're ready ?” I tell elza yeah and I head up stairs to the captains seat. ( the spaceship is the size of a big building and has nine rooms. A command space where we drive and all,I'm the driver. Only three people can be in the command space excluding the captain.) Elza shows up to pull up the galaxy map. Which is in holographic and moveable by waving my hand. She shows me the location and says " you know what to say now' I reply with a smirk yeah. Three, two, one lift off. The space ship starts to fly out of the orbit and warm.up the warp drive, everyone in the command space are sitting down, I sit in the captains chair. I hit a button that tells everyone that we are going into warp. Hoping We all would get to the solar system on time. When launched into warp, space time started to go faster. going throw warp was like traveling through another universe, stars looking like walls of light. [/spoiler]

I like it! :) It has potential! Just edit your grammar, maybe, it would be better! Don't give up! Just keep writing and reading and you'll get even better than you are now!