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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • Wow, dude thats tight. lots of fancy shmancy pantsy people dressed up to come and talk to you about YOUR boo. I believe that you should do whatever u believe is best for getting your book published. I mean hey, we've waited 3 moths for a new chapter, we can wait alot more (atleast i can, lol) -alwayz and forever a Sir Brilliant supporter Koolest Guy

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] sir_brilliant [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] dinkman105 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy But, I like girls. A lot. [/quote] ya and i smart[/quote] yes...i smart. i speak english good too. me got ejumacashion at SU (subway university) as for a few hints or clues as to the next chapter, i'd have to say that kilroy is pretty darn close. he knows what he's talking about, and he knows how i write. of course, there is more depth to what he said...but if i gave that away, then there wouldn't be any fun, now would there? as for the time for playing the tourney, it looks like it'll be sunday...but we're still workin out a few bugs.[/quote]i told u

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  • Bril, this is a good time for an FFX ripoff: This is your story. You can do with it whatever you want. Your fans will follow you no matter what you do, unless it involves a) destroying all evidence of the last 4 chapter so that we will never find out what happens or b) drinking soymilk. I personally would like to see the last 4 chapters posted in this thread. It started here and I feel it should end here, as a fanfic among the fans, as opposed to a book ont he shelves. But it is your story, and you should do what you think is right. No matter what that may be, unless it is the a or b from above. So, yeah. Do whatever. Except a or b. Getting kinda repetative, isn't it.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] einx359 Bril, this is a good time for an FFX ripoff: This is your story. You can do with it whatever you want. Your fans will follow you no matter what you do, unless it involves a) destroying all evidence of the last 4 chapter so that we will never find out what happens or b) drinking soymilk. I personally would like to see the last 4 chapters posted in this thread. It started here and I feel it should end here, as a fanfic among the fans, as opposed to a book ont he shelves. But it is your story, and you should do what you think is right. No matter what that may be, unless it is the a or b from above. So, yeah. Do whatever. Except a or b. Getting kinda repetative, isn't it. [/quote] FFX was an awesome game. Serious. I loved that game. Then the sequel freakin sucked.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] thunder_bolt If it will help i rather see your book published than another chapter[/quote]what he said

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  • I would rather see the 4 chapters.

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  • I say that you should do what you feel is going to help you more. If it doesn't hurt you to publish the final four chapters, then you should because with all of these posts it's obvious that its what your fans want. Whatever you do though, Sir, I'm with you and if it's possible will I be able to get an autograph. Good luck!

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  • Wow man, you got some eriting talent there. This was an excellent prolouge to a Halo 2 book, I wouldn't mind if you wrote the whole thing! As for the new name, I suggest The Redemption, because they probably believe that they were allowed to form a new group. I like the name, it's very catchy!

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] einx359 Bril, this is a good time for an FFX ripoff: This is your story. You can do with it whatever you want. Your fans will follow you no matter what you do, unless it involves a) destroying all evidence of the last 4 chapter so that we will never find out what happens or b) drinking soymilk. I personally would like to see the last 4 chapters posted in this thread. It started here and I feel it should end here, as a fanfic among the fans, as opposed to a book ont he shelves. But it is your story, and you should do what you think is right. No matter what that may be, unless it is the a or b from above. So, yeah. Do whatever. Except a or b. Getting kinda repetative, isn't it. [/quote] very nice way of putting it... yeah i want to see those 4 chapters... just make a deal with recon to where you post the last 4 we read them and he locks the thread... its not like even if the book is published we wil copy and paste the whole thing into a file in word and sell it for 2 bucks...

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  • If it gets published, you should put Sir Brilliant as your author name! That would be awesum and funny plus itd be a nice little tribute to bungie.net and all the people here that made you book what it is.

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  • I would love to see the last 4 chapters in the thread but getting the book published would be pretty awesome, so as a lot of other fans have stated the decision is yours as to if you post here or hold off and hopefully get it published. Hope you get the answer you have been waiting for with this meeting of bigwigs.

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  • Hey Brill, i was just wondering, have you started writing anything else, now that you are done w/your fanfic. I would like to something original(pplease don't take that as offensive) from you

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  • wow i havent bin on here for ages and wow Sir B is getting it published, can i ask is it being published into the actual halo universe or is it going to be still called a fan-fic? -byron

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  • Woah... i go off to do other things for a few months and you might be getting the book published?! damn... i really should read the 100+ pages of forums i missed... but hey, a girlfriend made up for all the updates i missed :p its your choice, either way ill get to read those 4 chapters :)

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  • Dont think he can. What if it goes against the storyline? Readers buy it, read it, then Eric comes and publishes his and they all get confused. Your storys good but it doesnt go with what bungie has.

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  • I think you should post the last chapters...

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  • You should publish, 1 You would make Halo History if it gets published 2 If you write another book you have a better change of getting it published. 3 you would have done dealings with bungie and thus might be able to work out other deals in the future in less time, with more content. 4 That would be plain cool. Well those are my reasons to let it get published.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] The Demon 117 Wow man, you got some eriting talent there. This was an excellent prolouge to a Halo 2 book, I wouldn't mind if you wrote the whole thing! As for the new name, I suggest The Redemption, because they probably believe that they were allowed to form a new group. I like the name, it's very catchy![/quote] lol. He's gonna be really pissed when he realizes the Bril restarts the story a few chapters into it. I was at first. lol I want you to get it published because: A) You can get future, original books published easier if you already have one under your belt. B) You'll get money. C) Bungie might hire you to write novels for future projects. D) I can say I supported the book before it got published.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Kilroy I want you to get it published because: A) You can get future, original books published easier if you already have one under your belt. B) You'll get money. C) Bungie might hire you to write novels for future projects. D) I can say I supported the book before it got published.[/quote] Ditto! that would be sweet i hope it gets through bungie though

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  • SB can u please contact me bout the tourney, im lost as to when we're playin and what we're gonna do, PM me please.

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  • Yeah man I wrote some stuff too, but mine is just about stuff in the game like what happens to the Marines that you free in Gravemind after the cheif leaves. You on the other hand take it a step further which I think is much harder to write about than stuff that happens in the game. If you want to take a look at my story check out my site and look it up under the story section.

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  • 1. Original green power ranger> any other power ranger 2. FFX= great game Anyways, SB I would much rather you not put the chapters here if it helps with you getting published. We've been waiting for a while, but Im willing to wait longer if it means seeing your book get published. You are gonna set history man, the first fanfic author to ever publish a game company's book. Id be much more excited to buy your book off the shelf then to just read it on this site. Please, just do whats best for getting yourself published. Btw do you have any idea when we'll be playing? [Edited on 10/8/2005]

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  • We ve waited dthis long we can wait longer for the last chapters.And like Karma i rather buy it on the shelf too.And the girl(cant remamber the name) who drew the picture of the chief and the arbiter somewhere in the first 100 pages should be the cover. [Edited on 10/8/2005]

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  • damn, you guys are awesome. Everyone but prowlaz (lol, j/k) i can see why you feel that way prowlaz and cpt. waffles, but the vote is in. however, i still feel bad that i won't be putting anything up, so i'm going to take a chance. I'll post the first of five segments of the chapter(which actually is 11 and a half pages...told you i can't count). It answers the last question of chapter 29. as for the tourney, its tomorrow at 8-9ish pacific time. I'll be on, but since i'm gonna be editing literally all night so i can drive the manuscript down and give it in person, i'll probably doing one of my famous all nighters. however, i'll be on aim with the screenname 'brilliant sir' if anyone needs me, but make sure to read the away message.

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  • Chapter 30 2137, Oct. 22, 2552 (Military time)/ Forerunner Structure, the Ark John watched in horror as the ancient figure he had hoped never to see again appeared behind the Prophet. The leader of the Flood, an immensely large and powerful foe, stronger than any of the combat forms and quite possibly the most terrifying creature he had ever witnessed. It was massive, the largest single being ever witnessed by any human. There was no way to measure its height because of its snake-like attributes: no formal body, just a long strand of green flesh that continued on as far as he could make out. Tentacles, too many for him to count, were ready to strike any target, although John noticed that they were attached to the main body and did have a limit to their length. “It is time to feed!” The being began to hammer away at the Prophet, but the shield it had held. The speed of the tentacles gave a crack like that of a whip, and the force which they connected with made the ground under the Prophet and his forces give way. Each new strike caused them to go lower, and immediately moved out from the area. The Brutes, Jackals and Drones opened fire on the Flood leader, but nothing seemed to damage it. The Prophet began hovering towards the center of the room when the back ranks of the Preeminent forces were attacked by more Flood. Friendly chatter broke out through the ranks, yelling and screaming. They were being attacked from behind. “Move into the room and set up a perimeter around the closest pillar!” John made his way to it and stole another glance at the Prophet and his followers, who were both safe and in immense danger. If that shield they had had a limit, then the Prophet would soon be gone. It might be a worthy death… An explosion rumbled from behind, making John look back briefly. Fire spewed from the entrance he’d just entered through, and the last of the Preeminent forces exited, followed too closely by Flood combat forms. He saw one Hunter hit a combat form, making it fly across the room, only to be attacked by three others. “All Spartans and marines, form up on my position! Commander, I need you to set up a perimeter around us using the Hunter’s shields to keep the Flood at bay. Get your Elites and Grunts to stay behind them to fight off any of the flying and jumping Flood.” “Yes, this will give us time to form a strategy.” He ran off and started communicating through special channels, and they all quickly followed his orders. These were truly the greatest of the Preeminent, and John was glad he knew which side they were on. “All Spartans and marines, reporting!” Commander Keyes looked directly at John and waited for her orders. Even though she was a higher ranking officer, she knew better. The Master Chief was possibly the best ground fighter in the history of Earth, and she didn’t want to take command over something she knew she couldn’t win. At least with John in command, they stood a chance. Just as John was about to give out his orders, more Spartans joined his group. He’d never seen any of them, and the tint of their armor was a shade darker. There were nine of them, and a tenth older Spartan ran in, as fast as John last remembered her. “Kelly reporting, with the Spartan III’s, Master Chief!” John and the rest of his Spartans were in shock for a full second, and they only broke out of it because of Kelly’s quick thinking. “This is the Master Chief of the Spartan III’s, and their team. They are under your command as senior officer of the highest rank. What are your orders?” “Wait, there are two Master Chiefs?” Johnson normally wouldn’t have trouble with such minor things, but the similarities between the two different suits were so small that it was extremely difficult to tell the distance without the most practiced eye. “We don’t have time for this,” Keyes shouted. She turned to John. “Master Chief, you are hereby promoted to Master Chief Petty Officer of all Spartans. Now, what are your orders?” Taking a brief moment to acknowledge the field promotion received, it was short lived by an intense explosion that flared his shields and dropped several Elites. The Flood had managed to activate grenades, and were throwing them now. “We’re going to split up into three teams: red team, blue team, and green team. Blue team and green team will take on the Flood leader attacking us from behind, pounding it from the sides while the Preeminent attack them head on. They’ll play a support for the main force, and keep it preoccupied.” “Red team will consist of one person, who will go and infiltrate the control of this facility before the Prophet can reach it and activate this place. It will require someone who can hack into the systems and shut them down, or at least lock them out. And fast.” He knew every Spartan would want to go for this mission, and he himself wanted to, but John also knew that he lacked the qualifications for such an objective. He didn’t know if any of his remaining team could accomplish it, although with more Spartans, there were more chances for it to work. “I’ll go.” John’s face scrunched together rapidly as he recognized it to be Kelly’s voice. “Negative. You don’t have the necessary skills to infiltrate the system.” “She doesn’t, but I do.” Cortana?? The AI construct that had saved John’s life too many times for him to count had suddenly returned to give it another go. “It’s a long shot, but I’m the only one who can make sure the Prophet won’t get in the system.” Swiftly shaking his head from the constant change of everything, John simply went along with it. “Fine, make your best speed. Green team will be lead by the Master Chief, and will consist of him and any six Spartans of his choice. I’ll lead blue team and take the rest. Marines, take up secure positions among the Preeminent forces and keep any combat and infection forms off our backs.” Right before Kelly ran off, John grabbed her shoulder. “Where’s Dr. Halsey?” “Don’t worry; she’s in the safest place here.” She pointed to a tall pillar, and he noticed a small indentation in it, where several strands of hair could be seen sticking out. They were grey. He let go and saluted her, then went off to take out the Flood menace.

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  • Theres about to be a huge ass war i can feel it.

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