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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • You Crazy! LOL Cant wait for the next chapter!

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  • Sorry, bit off topic but whats the diff from a college and university in the States?

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  • i think just in name

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  • Im sorry to nag everybody like this....but if u like halo fanfics, id like u all to come check out my story titled A Means to an End (Fleet Enhancements)....i would really appreciate if u could take a look at it

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  • Keyes Join The_Ark fan fic group. There is a link in my sig. Post it there.

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  • waaaaa

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  • well since im at a friends house i wont have the time to read up on ur story so it'll be a few more days befor i can get to readin' it...just thought id drop in...

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  • the site is better than the thread. theark.thinkgames.net

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  • Still good to keep things active here.

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  • JOIN THE GROUP!!!!!

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  • hey, yeah, i'm out partying tonight, but i'll come back and probably write...btw, someone mentioned that i'll be majoring in writing, but thats NOT TRUE! bet no one here can guess what i actually will be majoring in, at least for the moment.

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  • i give 5 guesses 1. Computer related major 2. Dance lol 3. Criminology 4. Medicine 5. Athletic training

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  • YES!!!! YESSS!!!!! YEESSSS/!!!!!! BRILLIANT MENTIONED ME!! I WAS THE ONE WHO SAID HE'LL BE MAJORING IN WRITING!!!!, YESSSS!!!! HE RESPONDED TO SOMETHING I SAID. OHH I THINK I'M GONNA HAVE A STROKE/HEART ATTACK1!!!!!!!. YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!! i know what ur majoring in.... Border Control? Right? [Edited on 6/25/2005]

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  • iyou guys know what brilliants story REAALLYY is righ?. its the plans for an evil aliens race to take OVER THE PLANET!!!!. your UNCLE IS AN...... ALIEEENNNN !!!!! you must find the super atomic ultramatic nitrogen powerd froodlenutzkie death ray and fight your uncle for possesion of the plans, but be careful for he will reveal to you his true form OHH NOOOOOOO!!!! and you must fight him to the death before the alien gang arrives and takes everone to the planet Spain where the espanol people will perform gruesome expirements of the worlds water supply which will accidentaly start a supernuclear war with the water beings of the planet Atlantis and we will be forced to fight for the Espanols then just when we though it was over Shiska and Frankie and jason and Pete and Archonos and all bungie staff will come in with their super spaceship and start winging copies of HALO and HALO2 at the aliens killing them all because Halo 1 and 2 are th3 2 greatest things ever created. but the super magic from the discs will send out rad14710n which will mutate trees into the grassanoids which will then be killed by the lawn mowernoids of the planet Lawn Mowernoids. then when it looked like the humans won SpOnGeBoB died and people spent 394759384398843948 years mourning him. then the sun exploded and everyone died... except the bungie crew and ME and i would spend the next 90000000 years hanging out with them in the center of the sun XP 123212. where time is stopped allowing us to live forever even though we already could because the halo discs magic made us live forever. it had this magic beacuse way back when the games were almost done SHiska and his evil sidekick Puke implanted a Seeeccreetttt code into the game.then while in the sun XP 123212 the creators of The Legend of Zelda came and challenged us to a duel it was hard for me to decide who to team up with because i loved both games so I flipped a coin but it landed on its side so i killed them all and then brought them back using Halos magic power. then the LOZ creators said, Phyo chung fui hui!! derka tata nika geee pis nushu!!!! and then Earth blew up so Bungie Studios blew up but luckily back in 5647 a copy of bungie studios was copied onto a sacred golden Halo/Halo 2 combination disc. we had to embark on a quest to go find it..where we met the great Arnold he decided to join us on our quest, we traveld all the way to the planet Star Wars where Luke Skywalker and his jedi knights joined us we searched all of a galaxy far far away but couldnt find the disc so we moved on to the nest galaxy where we found a bunch a cute little kittens and puppies and bunnies and hamsters and cute little chipmunks, they were so fuzzy and cute we all took one home and took care of it. when i got home with my new kitty puppy hamster, and chipmunk i decided to play halo 2 but when i tool the disc out of its case it was GOLDD!!!! the sacred disc was found i quickly told bungie and they said ok i then uploaded the new bugnie studios Halo 3 came out and everone was happy ( i had repopulated the world with Cortana) and then bungie came out with the Super deluxe verson of Halo it included Halo 1 Halo 2 Halo 3 all on one disc and Halo 1 now had live capabilties so i could play all three games on xbox live. the three HALOS TOGETHER SOLD 37492648965782543678436180649632487365180643532532784020 Copies shattering the record and everone IN THE WORLD loved Halo and bungie. and we all lived happily ever after.. sorry if i angered briliant. with this spam\? but i had to tell my life story before tthe mexicans could freeze me [Edited on 8/2/2005]

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  • I dont know hat drug your on but can i get some of it?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EAGLES5 Still good to keep things active here.[/quote]that's why i posted...i noticed that the thread had fallen to the 2nd page and decided to give it a bump, but looking back, i dont know if that was the right kind... yesss!!! i finally caught up; just read chapter 23. here's my opinion of it: it wasnt the best one. if the chapters were ranked, this one would be in the lower part of the lower half. on the positive side, the action sequences were very detailed, some of the best in the book so far. better than nylund's in some parts, i think. on the negative side? the dialogue; the halo 2 extracted lines gave it a very--i hate to say it--cheap feeling. the action (as good as it was) dragged on a bit too long without any real plot twists. throughout the chapter, i couldn't help but feel that this was the demo rewritten in new york. the chinese man...im asian, and ive heard that stick thing before. its a nice saying, i like it. but the things added on seemed to be an average attempt at foreshadowing that didnt really connect the dots (to the saying) too well. another thing is that since this chapter reminds me so much of the demo, which was set in africa, the chinese man struck me as "wtf" at first. then i remembered it was in new york...lol overall, 23 felt more like one part of a chapter where the story goes back and forth from one setting to another. there are other chapters like this, 13 (site, not thread) was undoubtedly one of the very best chapters written in this format. it had good editing, and the sense of yearning for information that it gave you at the end doesnt come everyday when reading. and you already know of what i think on the part where you turned the blame of heresy on the prophets. it sounded so plausible i forgot i was reading a fanfic. if chapter 24 would be a thick plotted one, 23 might not seem too bland if 24 were read right after it. the previous chapter could make a very good buildup to a nice twist., really. so, really, 23 is a buildup that in my opinion will only be as good and satisfying as 24 will make it. PS, i noticed that a significant number of your errors were in the words "they're", "there" and "their", which were used wrongly in a lot of cases. "their mine!"--the line screamed by the odst trying to runover multiple targets with the hog should have been "they're mine!" ( they're, "they are"instead of "their" which shows ownership of an object/s of two or more people) i still like the book a lot, even if the last chapter (on its own) wasn't exactly the best. keep up the great work. [Edited on 6/26/2005]

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  • you know what i think is strange right now? why a mod hasnt given this thread one of those gold septagon things. im not really sure what the criteria is for getting one of those, but i think this thread deserves it anyway.

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  • Wow.I just found out there making a halo movie.My cousin told me(he can found out just about anything on video ganes and stuff).He said that they already made the script and that they just need the director.I think he said that there wil be people acting but have some computer annimation.Kind of like star wars.Just saying.

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  • This is a fan fic which doesnt get attention from the mods. Shiska Joined The_ark groups to tell brilliant that he cant sell his story, thats about it. But since there are 3 other popular fanfics i dont think they would visit one and not the others even though this is the biggest.

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  • grrr...let me put everything into words... my major, as eagles guessed so vaguely and well, is going to be computer based: computer science, at least for the moment. that random story...whoa, bill and ted style. i thought it would end around the first 20 lines, but NO! it kept on, fought fire, earth, and alot of hate i was putting into it. dude, i must say, you have a frightening imagination. and the chapter 23...of course, i know it wasn't edited, and i usually don't edit the chapters before i post them, because i know that most of the stuff i probably screw up will be fixed my you guys mentally, while i'll fix it later. i'd rather have the chapter out with a few minor flaws that don't screw up the story than not have the chapter out for an extra day or so without em. i'll get the cleanup done soon enough anyways. this chapter, however, i thought i got rid of most of the halo2 lines, although i apparently didn't. my bad. i'll look into it, as the only time i ever play halo2 campaign anymore is with my little bro, and we never watch the cutscenes cause we've seen em a billion times. maybe i should watch them. and in case you were wondering since you did mention it, chapter 24 is a highly plot based chapter, but this one wasn't setting it up. this one was setting up and ending to the story, although i can't explain it. you'll have to see in time, although i do hear what you have to say about it and respect that. thx for the constructive criticism, that's exactly what i'm looking for around here. and don't worry people, i actually do talk to some of you...jgrrrr...lol oh, and since you guys are talking about why they don't headline this thread, its because it is a fanfic, and if they did so, it would mean that they favor it more than others, which they cannot do. before, when there was only mr. clark and myself, it still would have been a problem, because they probably thought more people would come around to doing the same thing. if anything, some mod's may read the stuff, but don't have the luxury of posting anything in the threads or doing anything with them. thus why you haven't seen any of them around here...forbidden land, i guess you could say, strangely enough. thats why we try to keep everything running smoothly with random flamers (haha, flamers) and double posting, etc. cause i don't want to screw the thread over, and they probably don't either. [Edited on 6/26/2005]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] J Grizzo iyou guys know what brilliants story REAALLYY is righ?. its the plans for an evil aliens race to take OVER THE PLANET!!!!. your UNCLE IS AN...... ALIEEENNNN !!!!! you must find the super atomic ultramatic nitrogen powerd froodlenutzkie death ray and fight your uncle for possesion of the plans, but be careful for he will reveal to you his true form OHH NOOOOOOO!!!! and you must fight him to the death before the alien gang arrives and takes everone to the planet Spain where the espanol people will perform gruesome expirements of the worlds water supply which will accidentaly start a supernuclear war with the water beings of the planet Atlantis and we will be forced to fight for the Espanols then just when we though it was over Shiska and Frankie and jason and Pete and Archonos and all bungie staff will come in with their super spaceship and start winging copies of HALO and HALO2 at the aliens killing them all because Halo 1 and 2 are th3 2 greatest things ever created. but the super magic from the discs will send out rad14710n which will mutate trees into the grassanoids which will then be killed by the lawn mowernoids of the planet Lawn Mowernoids. then when it looked like the humans won SpOnGeBoB died and people spent 394759384398843948 years mourning him. then the sun exploded and everyone died... except the bungie crew and ME and i would spend the next 90000000 years hanging out with them in the center of the sun XP 123212. where time is stopped allowing us to live forever even though we already could because the halo discs magic made us live forever. it had this magic beacuse way back when the games were almost done SHiska and his evil sidekick Puke implanted a Seeeccreetttt code into the game.then while in the sun XP 123212 the creators of The Legend of Zelda came and challenged us to a duel it was hard for me to decide who to team up with because i loved both games so I flipped a coin but it landed on its side so i killed them all and then brought them back using Halos magic power. then the LOZ creators said, Phyo chung fui hui!! derka tata nika geee pis nushu!!!! and then Earth blew up so Bungie Studios blew up but luckily back in 5647 a copy of bungie studios was copied onto a sacred golden Halo/Halo 2 combination disc. we had to embark on a quest to go find it..where we met the great Arnold he decided to join us on our quest, we traveld all the way to the planet Tatooine where Luke Skywalker and his jedi knights joined us we searched all of a galaxy far far away but couldnt find the disc so we moved on to the nest galaxy where we found a bunch a cute little kittens and puppies and bunnies and hamsters and cute little chipmunks, they were so fuzzy and cute we all took one home and took care of it. when i got home with my new kitty puppy hamster, and chipmunk i decided to play halo 2 but when i tool the disc out of its case it was GOLDD!!!! the sacred disc was found i quickly told bungie and they said ok i then uploaded the new bugnie studios Halo 3 came out and everone was happy ( i had repopulated the world with Cortana) and then bungie came out with the Super deluxe verson of Halo it included Halo 1 Halo 2 Halo 3 all on one disc and Halo 1 now had live capabilties so i could play all three games on xbox live. the three HALOS TOGETHER SOLD 37492648965782543678436180649632487365180643532532784020 Copies shattering the record and everone IN THE WORLD loved Halo and bungie. and we all lived happily ever after.. sorry if i angered briliant. with this spam\? but i had to tell my life story before tthe mexicans could freeze me[/quote] ..................Wow. I liked the kittens.

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  • Yeah Im shure they do read it. How else would Shiska have none to harss you in the group. They must stick there heads in here from time to time.

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  • yeah, that's what i kinda figured. dammit, i installed a program that was supposed to keep my hard drive clean and spiffy, and it erased my times roman numeral font. does anyone know where i can download it, because i get this crazy font for everything i've ever written now.

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  • sometimes its hard not to double post, because your mind has so much to say.and the things you might want to say are differnet so you cant put them on the same post. but what you said was true if anything happened to this post because of something i did i would probably be forced to send you flowers and a kitten. seriously though i do care about this post and will try to be more careful with double postinng.. etc.

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  • No worrys. Back in the day when many man more people posted in this thread we would grow like 2 pages a day and people would flame and argue, post way way off topic, post there own storys and get pissed when noone liked them. Hell One time when Brilliant didnt post for awhile made mup a a 1 paragraph story on the MC and Arbitor play russian roulete (sp) anyways its no big deal. This thread is ver clean, no more flames, not many doubles. It still grows pretty steady.

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  • Yeah. People used to post the weirdest things here: other fanfics, ideas for new maps, etc. There was also a lot of flaming, people saying that brilliant was a -blam!-, and that he shouldn't be doing this, even though it was his fanfic. It seems to have calmed down, but now, we're not on the front page as often. We used to always be there.

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