speaking of chapters when should we expect the next installment Sir Brilliant. There's no rush take your time and make another Brilliant chapter

Heres what you should do if the thread dies. SAve all your Chapters in deifferent files ex. Chap.1=doc.1, Chap.2=doc.2 and so on. Then create a new thread with the entire story posted on the first few pages. Then with every new chapter thats comes out post/edit on your first post were that chapter is. Great organizing the story and people don't have to sort through evrything to get to the story. New planes or new versions of the Lonsword fighter would be cool. [Edited on 4/28/2005]

no, i think that whats killing this thread, other than the fact that i haven't posted a new chapter in the last two weeks due to circumstances has been because its difficult to read everything at once, and alot of people don't want to do it. i know i don't at times. i'll tell you guys, there are alot of people sending me the stuff they write and asking me what i think of it, and alot of the time i just think to myself "i don't wanna read this", even if i haven't looked at it. and with over 25 posts of story, its a daunting thing to do in one sitting. and then there are people like you guys who try it out and like it, and come back for more. if nobody liked it, i doubt that i'd finish it, but i'd probably write out a huge sketch of what i think should happen, no details included, and i'd simply post that in a thread somewhere on bungie.

awesome......goodnight all......9:43 where i live and ive had a full day! including winning my 800 meter dash in track! Brilliant = awesome

cool only 3 year difference what exactly do the spartan 3's look like

whats killing this post is the fact that it is 150 pages long

Im only 16, so dont go callinf urslef stupid

It still ain't showin up. Hey I'm only 13years old It's the best explaination I could think of besides my brain is not as big as you grown-ups.

sorry if it's a double post it didn't show up first time. Hey guys I'm only 13years old it's the best explaination I could think of. I just thought the Spartan 3's could be the extreme thinker's. Thank's for the help.

yeah, i remember too, EAGLEs is right, and also if the spartan 3's were the deformed, mutated spartans earlier, they wouldnt be able to move or do anything physical (well at least not able to fight)

DUDE, we have already seen the spartan 3s and they werent the same people trust me. I see what ur sayong, but if U remember from the fall of reach, the deformed spartans, just became tactictains for ONI, u see one of there reports on the covenant tech, in The Fall of Reach Read back a fiew chapters here, and u will see what i mean

The S-lll file is definatly spartan3. The spartan3's are all the kids the were deformed after the body enhancement and training. those kids could only think and plan not fight. Mendez says in The fall of reach they have thier own special missions becoming an S-lll is thier mission.

sorry for the triple post ealier, i didnt think it posted, well, even though i read it earlier, good chapter, and that guy is right, this post is slowing down, i remember when people would post every 2 minutes, now its every 2 hours.

whoa ever since my last response no1 is replying to this forum KEEP THIS FORUM ALIVE U IDIOTS I THOUGHT U LOVED SIR BRILLIANT'S WORK ITS GONNA DIE IF U DONT RESPOND MOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, hi is using the novs, we were talking about them, but we were calling them planet killers

uuuuuhhhhhhhh *DRUEL* x 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 yo sir brilliant i have a fever and the only prescription is more of your masterpiece i am drowning my dog cuz im drueling so much and he is right under me hes going 2 die and i cannot get up from my seat cuz i MUST READ NEXT INSTALLMENT hurry up or im sewing ur ass 4 murdering my mut lol jk

Yep, I hope some big questions are answered next chapter. By the way, earlier on people were talking about Nuclear devices and stuff, and I was wondering - are you gonna include those "Novas" in some upcoming space battles? 'Cos I remember Admiral Whitcomb talking about them in First Strike. He mentioned that the UNSC would use them in Space battles to even the playing field. I look forward to some "explosive" next chapters.

It wasn't the best but still good

Although it was already posted in the beginning of your story, it still remains a good chapter. The cliffhanger is one of the many things i've been thinking about, but i can't get an answer to that question. I hope we get the answer in the next chapter.

well, i've finally sorted out my idea's for the next group of chapters, and decided on what will be happening. here's the gameplan: I'll post a chapter that i've written before, something that many of you have already read, with a few adjustments made to it. tomorrow or friday i'll have the next chapter after that, which will take place before the chapter being posted here now. don't think about it too much, it'll say the dates. so here it is, read it if you haven't or if you want to. Chapter 13 First Age of Rebirth/Yielding Righteousness/Preeminant Flagship The Supreme Commander walked into the temple, his steady pace making him appear to hover above the ground as well as a Todstilla Ordidor. His silver armor reflected the luminous purple lighting used in this holy sanctuary. Scanning the room, he spotted his target. The Arbiter. Walking over to him immediately alerted all honor guards present in a 20 foot radius, yet they all turned away when they saw who came forth. Now beside the Arbiter, he fell on his knees, bowed, and whispered a short prayer. Straightening up, his eyes turned and locked onto the Arbiter, who sat in a meditative stance, both arms as though they held a ball and eyes closed. As he opened his mouth to speak, the ball was broken, and the General found one hand held up, indicating both silence and acknowledgement. Standing up, the Arbiter followed suit, slowly opening his eyes, then was led out of the temple, but in no hurry. The Arbiter turned back towards the temple, and gazed upon its magnificence. The peace he received during every meditation here astounded him, as though he belonged in this temple, and no other. Perhaps this ship, and no other. With that, he left his sanctuary, to continue his holy mission. His duty. “Your report, Drashaa.” “Yes, Arbiter. As you know, the fleet engaged the holy world three hours ago. Although our forces are still gathering, I have been able to assemble a small fleet, and can engage and arrive there in 15 minutes.” “How many ships?” The General paused, which the Arbiter knew was a bad sign, because he would not be counting the number of available ships. But because they only had less than two hours before leaving the second ring and bringing together a group to begin with, his fleet could be considered a miracle. Yet would it be enough? “There are 20, Arbiter.” The Arbiter turned and paced, deep in thought. The General looked down, as though he had failed his mission, only to be surprised by the Arbiter’s quick reply. “It will simply have to do. I want you to find you’re most trusted soldier and task him collecting all remaining forces. And thank Captain Noiz again for his incredible service to us all.” The Arbiter looked him directly in the eyes. “Now tell me, what of our guests?” “The Human’s remain unseen by all aboard, and can remain so indefinitely. However, communication with them has been severed.” “How so?” “I believe that the ring may have translated our language’s to us instantly, allowing our mutual understanding. Without it, we have no means to communicate.” “I see.” The Arbiter turned away once more, facing a large window that showed the blackness of space, only to be blocked by those ships ready to be sent, possibly to the slaughter. If all went well, many Covenant ships, with officers who knew nothing of the Prophet’s treachery, would learn of it, and attempt a takeover of that vessel. The number of acquired ships, however, was impossible to determine. “Order the fleet to engage.” The General bowed gently, then turned and headed for the door. As it opened, the Arbiter, almost whispering, but with enough force to grab the Commander’s attention said, “Personally.” Astonished and in shock, the General turned towards the Arbiter, with his thoughts showing on his face. “Arbiter, you wish me to lead the fleet?” The Arbiter faced his general, keeping a steady gaze. Kneeling to one knee, the General said, “Arbiter, I cannot take this honor away from you,” and bowed his head. The Arbiter walked over and placed his hand upon the broad shoulder. “I must, as more important matters await my immediate attention. Now rise, and do as I command, Drashaa. Give Noiz control of a fourth of the fleet, and command the rest. And take the Human with you, the one whom we agreed upon.” Looking up, he rose and rushed to the door, knowing his mission could wait no longer. Just as the door opened, the General craned his head back. ‘But what of yourself, Arbiter? Can I not assist you in any way?” Smiling, the Arbiter shook his head. “My mission is to find this ‘ark’, before the Prophets do. They undoubtedly have the location of it, and once they complete their journey to the holy world, I fear that it will be their next destination. I must secure it before this can happen, and find whatever secrets it holds.” “I understand.” He turned and ran out the door, leaving the Arbiter alone once again. Looking out the window, thoughts rushed through his mind. One thing that had always eluded the Arbiter was fate. He understood that everything had a certain path they would lead for their lives, yet he always wondered whether what he was doing was his faith. Born into the warrior caste and becoming the general of the armies showed how formidable of an opponent he was to anyone and anything. But is this what is supposed to be? Only a few days before, he could never have imagined such a drastic turn of events, for both himself and the entire covenant. What was the cause of this? More questions ran through his mind, but he focused on one and tried to explain it. The parasite! That was where the first problems arose. The feeble humans stood no chance, even though some of their tactics and weapons were quite effective, it was only a matter of time before their complete extermination. But when the single human ship, the Pillar of Autumn, landed on the first ring, and the parasite attacked, problems arose. With the difficulty in destroying the parasite, and with the constant barrage from the humans and their demon, there was little chance he had at stopping the destruction of the ring. And even the second ring brought forth the same problems, except he led no one. Yet the addition of the Brutes to the covenant seemed minor, his failing at the first ring allowed them leeway no species has ever had in the covenant. It was then that their treachery became known, as well as the prophet’s deceitful act towards the Sangheili. No. This is where fate has brought me, and for good reason. If the parasite never appeared, then he would never have become the Arbiter. And the first ring would have been activated, destroying all of them. And even if the demon had stopped that from happening, it would undoubtedly have happened upon the second ring. Fate was not to blame for this heresy. The Prophets were. “Perhaps I may be of service?” The familiar voice startled the Arbiter, as his plasma rifle was aimed directly at the eye of 343 Guilty Spark. “Oracle!” Immediately harnessing his weapon and calming himself, he shook his head, confused at how its presence had been masked from him. “How did you enter this room?” “Why, there is an interesting system of passages that contain the gases your species uses to breathe, such as Oxygen, Nitrogen, Carbon Dio…” “Ahh, Oracle, you came through the air passageways. A clever way to circulate throughout the ship. However, to answer you’re question, I could use information.” “Splendid! How may I be of service?” This machine was interesting, having emotions, and floated through the air with no equipment seemingly being used. It almost seemed like another living being, other than its looks. “I would like to know about the humans.” “Humans? Oh, species classified number 001.” Species 001? “Yes, the reclaimers have quite an interesting history, having war after war, and always having so many…” “Wait, you claim them to be the first species you encountered, and you call them reclaimers. Surely, other species have come before us to the rings.” “Of course, and they were disposed of by the Flood.” “But if this is true, why are they the first species listed in your databank? Why are they the reclaimers?” “Because they were designated to be the only species allowed to commence the activation of any ring.” I am asking the wrong question! The Arbiter thought for a moment, and then stared directly into the large, blue eye. “Oracle, who created the rings?”

Lol

Thats not what I meant. I meant that guys a dumbass posting in here about a load of horse -blam!-. Personaly I love anything milatary. I was just calling that guy a nerd cause he called everyone here a nerd and I was pointing out that if he thought we were nerds posting here, why was he posting here. Thats all.

napalm is awesome! specially in Vietnam!! that would be cool to see some

So what do you guys think of the new maps? personally i wish there were more snipers in cointainment. [Edited on 4/27/2005]

sorry for the double post but, who the hell you calling a geek or nerd? have you ever looked in the mirror lately? how are we nerds, is it because we know alot about war, military, violence and guns? wow then if thats why, all the armed forces are nerds then. Also just because we post here doesnt mean we dont have a life, me for instince, am a wrestling god (well not really) but i placed no lower than 3rd in every tournament ive been in.

EAGLES! how you been? havent played or talked with you in a long time. so what do you thinkg of my napalm gernade launcher.