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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • Dont 4get bout me, I'm willing to help out in any way. [Edited on 8/10/2005]

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  • yah i'll help too

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  • Just say when and my army of spammer will flood frank with emails and pm.s!

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  • hey guys, i'm reporting back from my meeting with this guy i went to talk to my book about. here's the summary: after discussing what could be improved about it, we reached the consensus that it was mainly grammar and other editing material, although most of the story was very well done. he said that as a 500 page manuscript, it was awesome (500 pages in some special format i put it in). he also mentioned that most manuscripts that long were around 80,000 words, and that most novels/books tended to be between 40,000-80,000 words. i have just under 100,000. that's a good thing. basically, i found that he could edit the story and do a damned good job with it, although it would take a year for him to do, just because he is working on his own book, working, and has a life of his own. obviously, i won't be waiting that long, but he did say that it was good enough to be published. as long as i have that, i can move forward. so, bearing all that in mind, i plan to catalog everything i can use to market the story as best i can, and bring it to bungie/microsoft, stating that it is unedited. whether that is a good idea, i will find out later,...however, i know what the goal is, just getting there is gonna be tough.

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  • dude this is awesome i really hope u make this book even if it is unnofficial, besides u should be a writer for halo3 cus ur great at it. keep up the good work and good luck with this book

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] EAGLES5 yeah lol, with a narrator saying it.[/quote] Yeah, like that guy who does the voice for promoting movies!

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  • Great, except when you said "These two factions," you said, "These to factions".

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  • and alitte halo floating in the back ground

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  • yeah lol, with a narrator saying it.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] sir_brilliant [b] Even the greatest soldiers in the universe may not be enough to stop the spreading war, unless they are able to reach the one place that could end all life in the galaxy… [/b] [/quote] * Insert Halo theme tune here *

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  • ...good...

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  • Yeah the summery was good. I wasnt paying attention and thought it was a sneek peak to a new chapter.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stoliman Thanks Karma2343, I feel much more at home.... [/quote] Of course. And SB, that is a great back-of book-summary thing. Keep up the good work, and good luck at the meeting.

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  • Man that was really good oh man you should be a writer for Halo 3.

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  • Wow Sir Brilliant, that was really good. If i may make a suggestion about one part of it. "....[u]as the entire UNSC has been pushed back to earth, and awaits the final strike against it and them.[/u]" - This needs a tiny bit of re-wording to make it flow a little smoother. The "it" in the sentece makes Earth sound like a living being. But what do I kno, im just a fan..... Keep up the [u]great work![/u] [Edited on 8/9/2005]

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  • Ok since most of u gave up ur levels, ill keep my end of the promise. 31. Oh ya and if any1 has the battlefield 2 demo let me know and give me ur gamertag cause i have no1 to play with in that demo, and if u dont have it, u should definitley get it, its amazing. Oh and almost forgot, good luck for tomorow Sir B. [Edited on 8/9/2005]

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  • oh yeah, i just heard that the 360 is scheduled to be released on nov. 4th...but don't blame me if i'm wrong, i heard it from someone else. and here's the back of the book thing i was talking about before...if anyone has any ideas on improving it, let me know before the night turns to day...lol [b] Even with the destruction of a second of the sacred Halo rings, the Human-Covenant war rages on, reaching the end of the line for the Human world. Only an elite team of warriors, who have trained all their lives can save their doomed cradle of life from bursting into flame. Yet even these Spartans cannot guarantee victory, as the entire UNSC has been pushed back to earth, and awaits the final strike against it and them. They prepare in the calm of the storm, and know that the day will arrive soon. Simultaneously, forces within the Covenant have shattered it into two. As civil war ensues between these to factions, Earth lies in the middle, hoping the two fires will burn each other out before the oncoming force can attack. Even the greatest soldiers in the universe may not be enough to stop the spreading war, unless they are able to reach the one place that could end all life in the galaxy… [/b] [Edited on 8/9/2005]

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  • Alright, thank you for the news! I give you the best of luck with this meeting you got tomorrow.

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  • hey guys, what up. i'll be letting all you know about my meeting tomorrow directly after i get home and on the comp. yes, its true, i live in the excessively sunny so cal, in malibu-santa monica area. btw, my level is now a 24 or 25, thx to the help of sumnub x(shotgun masta here) einx, and koolest dood. and i've got to make a back page thing for the book...like the paragraph or two on the back cover of any book. i'll be working on it now, and post it before the night is over.

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  • 28, probley could get up to 30 but i had a bad game, alot of quitters, and a de-leveler. so i got back down to 24. But now im back to 27. And to the guy who was talking about how halo2 can be inproved, and about halo3 and crap, i think halo3 will be awsome. Its the last halo, what do you expect. It will be huge. I expect 10x bigger. 2 disks probley. And about 40 multiplayer maps!

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  • Thanks Karma2343, I feel much more at home....

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  • Hahaha ok flaming idiot, no need to get all uptight. Sorry about that post, I looked back at it and saw that it was a little "mean." I don't want to have any transgressions with any1 here. Well I changed the post to fit a more likeing manner and to help Panther with his posts a little more. And to [u]minywheat and karma[/u]: I'm lvl 28 living in Sunny San Diego, i'd be playing online cept my internet is tweaking out soo i go to blue screen every minute or so then lag out. Sir B will get back to us [u]no[/u] l8er than thursday with some more news 4 everyone be it little or small! Check back Wed. Gamertag = L T Novak [Edited on 8/9/2005]

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  • Ya, all of these shootins have only started happening recently, it is wierd. Its also wierd that the those cops had their M16s ready to fire right in front of a main road near the Kikorean Theatre street thing. We wanted to stop and watch but of course there was a lot of traffic behind, in front, and next to us so we couldnt pull out to park and watch. Anyway, keep up the good work at Camp Pendleton : )

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  • hey karma my wife works at the mall in vista.....and I am marine on camp pendleton ...any way the whole cops around the house thing is nuts to say the least

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] stoliman Sir B, I've got to tell you that I've played Halo and Halo 2, but was never much for the forums, so I only found this thread the other day when I was bored at work. Since then I've taken some time and read your story. It's been great and I've been very impressed. I've even sent the link to a few friends of mine that are into the game and books. Anyway, I got to chapter 30 today and came back in the thread to find out when the next chapter would be released. After reading a bit I find that we won't be seeing those new chapters until you see about trying to publish what you've written. I just wanted to say, absolute best of luck. You've written an absolutely incredible story. It reads a lot like 'The Fall of Reach' and you've done an tremendous job of weaving the storylines with a lot of things that have happened in the other books/games. I've got my fingers crossed that things go well with your attempt to get it published. I certainly look forward to reading the ending no matter if I have to buy it off the shelves or just wait for it to get posted. The story is definitely worth waiting for and you definitely deserve to get your stuff published. No matter how it works out for this particular story, I think you can see in this thread that you'd got one heck of a following. That tells me we'll all be seeing a book with your name on it before too long. I know I haven't been here from the beginning like a lot of these folks have, but I wanted to say good luck with your upcoming meeting and I'll certainly be checking in on here to see how things go. I know I'm a noobie on these boards (and boards in general) so flame away guys. :)[/quote] Join date doesnt decide how much of a noob you are, your intelligence does. But just for the fun of it, [b]*FLAME*[/b]

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  • The only Group page with Pwnage: http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/sonsofsamus/GroupHome.aspx

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