So you wrote a fan fiction. Your point? Also, the term you are looking for is Oroboros.
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Edited by muppetgrinder: 12/16/2014 1:50:56 PMWell the point is, I would like some feedback. It's not a big ask is it? Ouroboros* Edit: That's one way of looking at it. yes. Sorry I misunderstood why you brought that up.
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There are some awkward word choices and some grammar errors. There might be more issues, but I only read the first page. . You might try posting it on fanfiction.net instead. I was never a fan of fanfiction, but my friend use to post his fics on there a lot.
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I'll give it a look, thanks.