Very interesting, but you got a little lazy in the end. You could probably explain how is it that she got "The Stranger's Rifle" a weapon which shouldn't yet exist.
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well isn't that intuitive? she's from a different dimension..
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So does that mean the whole story takes place in a different dimension? And if that's the case how will you portray that without spoon-feeding the audience? You can't just tweak a few slight things like the color of the Speaker's robe or Shaxx fur since there would be people not familiar with the source material?
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Originally I didn't really intend to bring up the Stranger's rifle, nor it to be another dimension. I'd have to do some research on the rifle itself because i dont know anything about it aside from it being handed to me in the game.