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Create A Story & Win A Code FINAL

[i][b]Create a story / lore about destiny[/b[/i]] [u] [PLEASE][/u] - Be creative, [b]BLOW MY MIND AWAY[/b] - please no crappy submission's, but it has to be good. - no copying other story/lore from different website's.... - try google drive to save your work... [ optional ] - take time to finish the story & polish it,[quote][i] this competition end's 3/27/14[/i][/quote] Come on, start now[b] 5 winner's [/b]will be selected :) [P.S] this contest is being decided by the following judge's.... - TheAntiroxas/X2 [Me] timmy22 -Jacob & Isaiah [friend's from RL] - COW GUY HAS JOINED THE BATTLEFIELD Update: I'll PM The Winner's & Show There Name In The List Below [quote]Winner's [/quote] [quote]JustDin0[/quote] [quote]I Love Prizes[/quote] [quote]old account ant[/quote] [quote]Megan Bennett[/quote] [quote]VorpalFOX[/quote] ALL WILL BE REVEALED [b]10:00 PM [/b] [b]Thank You For Entering This Contest! Have A Fine Day [/b] [i]FYG - Fly Young Gentlemen, you are my sir![/i] [b]UPDATE: THE WINNERS ARE ANNOUNCED AT 10:00 PM[/b] [i] [NYC TIMEZONE][/i] [i][b]THOSE WHO PM'ED ME & WON YOUR EPIC NICE STORIES.... Pretty long though - Google Drive[/b][/i] [b]ONE MORE THING.... I LOOKED UP SOME OF YOUR STORIES THERE COPIED[/b]...

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  • Edited by MilesTheHunter: 3/24/2014 9:16:31 PM
    "Miles! Help! Help me!" Screamed Erika... [b]Earlier that day...[/b] A ship lands in downtown Chicago with a New Monarchy symbole on it. Out of the back walks 3 guardians of the last city with armor that's colored dark grey, crimson red, and touches of white for small detail. The titan holding his large machine gun promptly on his shoulder says," So why did the Monarchy concil want us here in chicago? I hope it's to get some pizza." The lean female warlock who was weilding a fusion rifle responded, " Weren't you paying attention Thorn?! There have been reports of large groups of fallen here. We need to confirm that they are and then find out why, and use any force necessary to accomplish it." " I was paying attention... well sort of," Thorn responded. " Where do you think those space monkeys are anyway?" The hunter whose holding a knife and a scout rifle on his back answers him, " The ships radar showed them being at the baseball stadium on the north side of chicago." "You sure about that Miles?" Thorn responded. "Yea, i'm sure." "Alrighty then boys, lets roll out," Erika said while pullin out her shrike. Thorn and Miles do the same and continue to the stadium. [b]Later at the stadium[/b] The three pull up to the main gate and walk through. "Lets head up to the top to get a good veiw of what they're doing on the feild," Miles suggested as they were hearing clicks and hissing in the birection of the feild. The three make their way up without trigering alarm amoungst the fallen. In the middle of the feild a large fallen captain, bigger then all the other captains, was shouting orders to the other captains and then shouting at the vandils and dreges. One group of fallen left the stadium while the other 3 stayed. The remaining 3 split up to guard the stadium as if they were awaiting supplies. "Alright crew, 1 group of about 12 fallen are by the scoreboard area. Another group went to the 3rd base side bleachers and the 3rd group is coming up here. Who wants the scoreboard?" Miles said as if he were taking the lead. "I'll take the scoreboard," said Thorn. "I geuss i'll take the 3rd base side," Erika said. "Alright guys, i'll stay here then," Miles said. Thorn started his way to the scoreboard. "Erika," Miles started taking off his helmet," Be careful, i love you." Erika walked over to Miles and took off her helmet and gave Miles a hug, "i will, love you to hun." She said and then went on to her position and put her helmet back on. Miles awaited his group to walk by him so he can silently take down the one in the back of the pack. So he climbed and hung in a dark cornor on the ceiling from some overgrown vines. A couple minutes later the small group of fallen walk underneith him and didn't notice. When the last one walked by he droped down apoun it and broke it's neck. In the distance there was hun fire from Thorns gun and then followed Erikas. This alarmed Miles group so he grabed his scout rifle and took 3 shots at the 3 closest dreges and took them down with their souls screaming out of them. A near by vandal holding a sword took a swing at Miles but missed only to be shot at point blank in the face. While Miles finished off the remaining vandals and dreges the captain was getting away. Miles ran after the captain who just jumped to the bleachers below. Miles jumped after him and landed on his shloulders. The captain threw him off and stood on his chest with one foot, pointing his gun at Miles' head. The captain laughed before pulling the triger. With quick thinking Miles triped and twisted the captain around and slit his throat. "Well, that could have gone better then i hoped." The gun fire at Thorns and Erikas positions cease and the three of them head to the pitchers mound. "What happend to the larger Captain?" Thorn questioned while looking at Miles an Erika. "Not sure," Miles answerd. "Are you two all good?" "Yea, ever been better," Erika answerd. "Same here," Thorn responded. "Good..." the heard a deep chuckle that sounded close. The three get back to back to back with guns ready. "He's invisable! Eyes sharp guys," Miles said. Just the a sword percices through Thorns Armor and the boss throws him a few yards away. "Nooooo!" Screamed Erika. The Captain swings an arm a Miles and knocks him out. The captain snatches Erika and telaports out of there. The last words Miles heard was Erika screaming, "Miles! Help! Help me!" (Shall i continue on with this or keep it how it is?)

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