originally posted in:The Black Garden
That is actually rather humorous, hopefully he learned from his mistake.
Nice work.
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I thought so too. Glad you liked this one. Aside from the foolish Chrev, what entertained you the most with this chapter? Any new likes or ideas with the release of this chapter?
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Hands down it had to be the Cabal takedowns. I found Nekosheth's members rather interesting (well mostly the twins and the silent titan).
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Which Cabal takedown did you like the most? I gotta say it's a little hard for me to pick a favorite between Tharsos' second kill and Sideros'. What did you think of Lukos' behavior around the twins?
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Sideros', it had that certain flair to it. Honestly? Pretty much how I figured he would act in such a position.
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Sideros' was pretty epic. I did like the grenade topping to Tharsos' too. And yes, Lukos is still being the usual Lukos. What are you looking forward to most with the next chapter?
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Seeing what will happen to the wannabe treasure hunter.
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Ah i see. Did you find his character amusing given their situation?
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Yes, but he caused his team to engage in unwanted combat so it will be interesting to see how his involvement plays out.
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He is a bit gullible and naive with his treasure hunting. We have yet to see how he operates in combat. Did the general mood and pace of the fight entertain you as you read it?
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Yes it did.
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I'm glad to hear it did. The overall plot of the fight took on a life of its own as i wrote it. And i was actually getting excited myself as i continued to write it out line by line. By the time i was done, i was very excited to post it for you guys to enjoy. I wasn't expecting it to come out that well but i am pleased it did.