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originally posted in:The Black Garden
1/30/2014 1:32:48 AM
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I like what I'm reading so far, stopped to say I like the 'effects' of the power exerted by the Warlock didn't effect the Exo like it does humans or Awoken.
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Glad you're liking it. Continue. You'll like the rest a little more I think.
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Nice, cool introduction of the new characters. The action was really good in this chapter, can't wait to read what is in store for the future chapters. Also, what does Nekosheth stand for?
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Thanks for the feedback. I liked the action a lot myself. As I was writing it, I was actually getting excited and couldn't stop writing it out. And I look forward to the future as well. Nekosheth was derived from "nechosheth" which means "steel."
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Okay, I'll have to remember that one. The drop was intense as well.
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Thanks. What was your favorite part overall?
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The part where Sachal meets Nekosheth; new beginnings? Also, the Cabal getting an HE Vitamin.
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Yeah, Shachal and Nekosheth will be working together in the near future. Recollect Chapter 8 when Siga Team gets info on Shachal and Nekosheth being deployed? And the vitamin had the flavor to blow your senses away with an explosion of tastes.
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Just like Gushers...but high in shrapnel. Yeah, I vividly remember that.
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Very gushy after the effect. That was my reason for stopping this chapter where I did. Shachal saved the team they are supposed to work with on this mission.
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Ah, okay. The future awaits!...
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Yes, but not for much longer. The next chapter will proceed with both units. Did you pick out a like from the Nekosheth Squad members that were introduced in better detail?
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A particular member you mean?
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Yeah. I didn't go into detail on all of them, but out of those that were introduced in more detail or had more of a part in this chapter, who interested you the most?
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Well, the two Awoken twins interest me (Machaira and Romphaia), why?.....I'm not sure yet. Chrev though, sounds like he may a little miss-guided by his intentions. Also, the silent Guardian (no, not Batman) Lonkhe Zerow has my eye...
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Cool. I personally like the twins and Lonkhe a lot too. I intended for Chrev to be a little gullible and full of himself. Maybe a little clumsy as well. I didn't give very many details on Keyla or Aksena but i like them too. Overall they are a tightly knit group. Glad you enjoyed this one. I hope to start working on chapter 11 soon.
