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originally posted in: ToTS Chapter Four: Friend or Foe
9/17/2013 4:45:11 PM
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It was not long before Nathan was in the same trance as he had been in before. Stark was once again enveloped in the strange aura as well. Lily sat there quietly and just watched in awe. As time passed she saw before her eyes some of Stark start to heal and then completely close up. Some of the other wounds did not heal as easily or as clean as the smaller ones leaving a scar behind. Sweat could visibly be seen dripping from Nathans forehead, with the occasional grunt of pain escaping his throat as he continued his work. It had been almost two hours before Lily heard a noise coming from the cockpit. Lily peered into the cockpit to see a light flashing and make a noise. Lily then remembered what Nathan had instructed her to do when this happened. Not wanting to waste any time Lily began to shake Nathan, yelling at me to wake up. Lily had be at it for a good minute before Nathan eyes finally snapped opened. “How long have I been at it?” gasped Nathan as he caught his breath and wiped the sweat off his forehead. “Going on almost two hours now.” said Lily. “Really? It seems like I had only just started to work on him.” said Nathan still trying to slow his breathing. “Well I saw it working before my eyes, most of Starks cuts have completely healed up.” said Lily. “That’s good to hear, I can never seem to tell time when I’m in that state. So if it was working why did you break my concentration?” just then Nathan spotted the blink light coming from the cockpit. “Good we are almost there, Stark should be fine until we reach the city and get him the medical care he needs.” said Nathan as he walked over to the chair in the cockpit and sat down. The two sat in silence for several minutes before a female voice could be heard coming through one of the ships speakers. “This is air defense control please ID yourself or we will be force to shoot you down, you have ten seconds to reply.” said a female voice before going silent again. “Yes, this is Guardian 29173 requesting permission to land and dock” said Nathan into a microphone. “Ah, welcome back Warlock Nathan, you have permission to dock, please head to docking bay B2. Can I assist you in anything else today?” asked the female voice. “Yes, I need a medical team awaiting my arrival at the docking bay, we have an injured party aboard my ship that needs medical attention right away.” replied Nathan. “Will do Warlock Nathan, a medical team will be waiting for you when you arrive, air defense control out.” For the first time Lily saw what she had only heard of in stories, the Traveler. Through a break in the clouds there it stood massive white metal sphere silently protecting the Last City as it had always done before. Lily had only heard about the Traveler through stories of wandering traders. She personally never believed them when they told her about its massive size. They had explained that is was so massive in size that it could block out the sun. Now seeing it with her own eyes she would never doubt those stories ever again. Below the Traveler stood the remnants of the last protect Earth settlement, it was truly a beautiful sight to behold. The finer details of the city became apparent as their ship got closer. Before long Nathans ship was flying over a massive wall that encased the whole city from every side. Lily spotted what appeared to be more men like Baldwin protroling the wall but she wasnt really sure.As their shipped weaved through the many tall buildings that broke into the skyline it was easy to see the life of the city below them. Countless people could be seen going about their day, shopping and trading from the many stalls that spanned throughout the cities streets. Some held foods of a wide variety while others sold weapons. As they continued on their way Lily saw many ships of different sized carrying and pulling along varies packaged, some small some bigger then the very ship carrying them. It was a sight to behold; Lily had never thought we would live to see the day where she would have the chance to visit the Last City. Not long after entering the city they were arriving at their assigned hanger. Lily walked over to Stark and held his hand in hers, “Just hold for a little bit longer Stark we are almost there. You will soon get the help you need and you will be well again.” No sooner had the cargo door of the ship opened up and hit the floor there seemed to be a dozen medical personnel inside the ship rushing in and over to Stark transferring him to a gurney and carting him off to a medical ship waiting outside. End of Chapter 4
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  • Sorry to keep you all waiting but you will just have to wait a bit longer. Chapter 5 has been written and will being going through several revisions before posting. The chapter will be up sometime early Sunday morning so check back then.

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  • Chapter Five in the process of being written right now.

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  • Next Chapter will be named Ghostly Past.

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  • Cant decide on the next chapter Title, Ghostly Past or Skeletons in the Closest. What does everyone else think?

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  • Another good chapter!

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  • Chapter One: http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Two: http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-2-Fates-Intertwined/en/Forum/Post?id=61724763#referred-Destiny (Destiny) Chapter Three: http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny) If you enjoyed the chapter please leave a comment below and tell me what you like or didn’t like.

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