nice, much better, good to see your back on to your usual standard (no offence but the cairo station chap wasnt all that) but this is good stuff - very dark and mysterious and so forth. i think you've captured truth characterisics very well, as well as tying in the story, very nice. keep it up and if this is a douyble post i apologise - crappy stuff with the tihng, like with that guy that time you know