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The Day The Wall Fell

The day the Last City was breached started as a day like any other. And it was all because a fireteam followed the advice of a young titan named Hillard-13. A male exo, he lived among the residents of the city, trying to blend in with the crowd. He usually succeeded in his ploy, but his fellow guardians kept bugging him constantly. The hunter Lacey-01 was usually the worst, often tracking his bulkier and slower friend. And today was no different. As Hillard-13 woke up from his recharging cycle, he was greeted by the exo face of his partner. And it was not a happy surprise. “HELLOOO, TITAN!” Lacey-01 screamed, ruining Hillard-13’s slow rise. “How are we doing today buddy? Come on, get up!” the antagonistic guardian said as he took Hillard-13 by the arm and ran him to a sink. “I’ll leave you alone while you spruce yourself up.” After the door was closed, the titan’s “eyes” grew accustomed to being awake. He lifted his head to look in the mirror and studied his features. His glowing blue eyes matched the color of his face plates, which matched the color of the tile behind him. An extra processor was on his forehead, giving him a Neanderthal-like look. After splashing his face with water to clear off a day's worth of dirt and grime. Hillard-13 turned around and opened the door. Lacey-01 was hefting around a rocket launcher that just so happened to be Hillard-13’s favorite. “Put that down before it crushes you.” Hillard said. “I would hate for you to die on my first day in the fireteam.” Hillard-13 had worked with Lacey-01 before, but today he was actually part of his fireteam. The prospect of working with an elite hunter excited Hillard, but it also worried him. They were friends, but Lacey-01 was reckless and a danger to himself and others. “Don't worry Hillard. I've used guns like this before. It is cool though.” “Yeah, and it's recoil is enough to turn you into a pile of scrap. Oh wait! That's right, you already are.” Hillard-13 said, jabbing the hunter in the arm with his elbow. “Come on, let's head to the tower. I can't wait to meet the third guardian in our fireteam.” And with that, Hillard-13’s greatest adventure had begun. They reached the tower soon after, where Lacey-01 put a hand on Hillard’s chest. “ Give me a minute, I need to talk to Cayde-6 first.” Intrigued, Hillard-13 followed the hunter to the Vanguard hall. Hillard-13 had never been to the tower with Lacey before, and he noticed how everyone almost cowered in front of him. Eris Morn held her precious orb behind her, and even Lord Shaxx put a firm hand on his papers. As soon as Lacey-01 put a foot on the steps leading down to the Vanguard, he saw looks of disdain. “Hey guys! I'm back! How are you Cayde, oh buddy, oh pal?” The Hunter Vanguard didn't even have to look up to know who it was. In fact, he put his palm to his forehead and said in a defeated voice, “Oh goddammit, not him again.” “What do you want now, hunter?” said Commander Zavala, with a barely concealed sigh. He looked to Ikora Rey, who was trying to ignore Lacey-01 by studying a map very intensely. “I want what we all want,” replied Lacey-01. “ Fame. Fortune. A lifetime supply of glimmer.” He climbed onto the table and sat on Ikora’s books, he feet resting on Cayde-6’s maps. “But for now I'll take a new gun. And I am not going back to Banshee-44. He almost shot me last time!” “Umm, yeah! You stole half of his arsenal! And then broke it!” Said Cayde, his metallic voice showing undeniably human anger as he stood upright with a start. Zavala looked at Cayde with enough force to destroy a hive tombship, and he reluctantly sat back down. “If we give you a gun, will you leave us alone?” Bargained the commander, clearly against his will. “Deal!” Exclaimed Lacey-01, taking advantage of Commander Zavala’s eagerness to see him leave. “I expect it within an hour.” He kept off the table and strode away confidently. “How did you do that?” Asked Hillard-13 after he caught up to his ally. “They love me. They just don't want to show it. Follow me, I'll bring you to your new warlock ally.” “Warlock? Of course! Why did I expect to have a team without a useless nerd.” Hillard-13 had a vendetta against warlocks. He was once in a strike with a group of warlocks. Instead of fighting, then spent hours deciphering ruins, collecting golden age tech. In his mind, a warlock was useless in a fight. “Don't think that this guy is useless. He's actually on of the best guardians I've ever seen. He's actually saved my life.” Lacey replied. He led him down into the depths of the tower, to where the guardians actually lived. In the crowd of exos, humans and awoken, it was hard to tell who was blessed with the Traveler’s Light, and who wasn't. Lacey-01 led Hillard through a confusing maze of rooms, and while the din of guardians lessened, the sounds of welding grew. Hillard-13 and Lacey-01 stepped into a large room, with the left wall covered in racks with vex weapons. To the right was the skeleton of a sparrow, which was hooked up to a very dangerous looking computer. Next to it was a large table with gun parts scattered over it. The ceiling had 5 hanging lamps, which struggled to illuminate the room. In the center of the room was a Fallen Walker, it's turret leaned against its side. “Hey Briere! How are ya?” Shouted Lacey-01. From inside the Walker’s carcass, Hillard could hear clanking, and then an exo face popped out of the body. “Lacey!” Shouted the new exo, and while the old friends embraced, Hillard took the time to study his features. It had a mainly bronze color with three dark blue stripes going down between the glowing cyan eyes. Near his ears there were what looked like stylish fins. Going up the forehead were kinds of slits, but he could not think of their purpose. After hugging his friend, the exo looked at Hillard. “Hello there. I am Briere-42.” He said, thrusting his hand forward to Hillard. He took his hand and shook it firmly. Hillard awkwardly introduced himself, and tried to steer the conversation towards the mission at hand. “Yes,” Briere-42 said. “ I need help getting something extremely valuable. To myself and the vanguard.” “What is it?” Questioned Hillard. “I need a living Fallen. Preferably a Captain from the House of Devils.” “Why?” “So that I can interrogate it. See, in my studies, I've found a lot of useful information. Where the Fallen heart is, where the pressure points are, and nerve clusters. I know how to break them, but now I need someone to break. Once I break the Vandal, I can figure out all the weaknesses of that house, and bring them down. Then it would just be us, the hive, and the Kings.” Briere-42 said as he went over to the table and started putting together a weapon. “Do you have any idea where we should start looking?” Asked Hillard-13. “Yeah, I've had Lacey do reconnaissance for me. I know exactly where a group of Kings are right now. I'll meet you in the tower hanger in an hour.” Responded Briere. Hillard and Lacey then left and headed to their ships. They met in orbit about ten minutes later. After Briere-42 was declared fireteam leader, he told everyone else to descend to The Cosmodrome in Old Russia. Worriedly, Hillard took out his ghost. “What do you think is going to happen?” Questioned Hillard. “I don't know, but I can access the Vanguard files to see what happened on his previous missions.” His Ghost replied “I didn't know you were allowed to access their files.” Said Hillard. “I didn't say I was.” Said the Ghost in a mischievous voice. It then began scanning for a way through the Vanguard firewalls. “I don't see a way through yet. It's going to take me a while” Content with waiting, the titan piloted his Phaeton Class v2.1 down to the patrol start point in the Cosmodrome. As he teleported down, he felt a vicious cocktail of emotions stir inside of his processors. He was excited to be on a mission with a group of such honored guardians, he was worried about what that mission might bring, a he was scared that his reputation with the Vanguard might be damaged if he messed it up: But he was going to do what every good titan does. Get the job done. This is just part one of a much longer story. This is my first attempt at a Fan Fiction. Thank you for reading if you got this far. Any constructive criticism is very appreciated. If you would like one of your guardians to be in the later installations, reply with which guardian of yours you would like to have, including a name, description of their face, and their attitude. I will add more to this story soon. Thank You! [quote]Moderator Note: [spoiler]Destiny Fan Fiction belong in the #Community sub-forum, #Gallery.[/spoiler][/quote]

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    • [quote]Any constructive criticism is very appreciated.[/quote] Destiny fan fic stories belong in #Community, sub forum #Gallery. Please use the forums properly.

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      • Bleach here, get'cha bleach here!

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        • Edited by Clone148: 5/13/2016 9:05:50 PM
          So you want a desticle off, do ya'h? [spoiler]A Fallen Captain runs down hill in the middle of a forest with seemingly no destination with a small sphere in one of his hands. He and his squad had been ambushed on their way to deliver an important relic to his House's Prime Servitor, they only made it a quarter of a way. One of his four arms has been badly wounded. He'll have to have it amputated, and according to his House's law, the other would come off as well. How humiliating. The only shot he has at being able to regain his rank is if he delivers the rel- *BANG* The head of a Fallen Captain bursts into a Stream of Ether and he fell to the ground. A Hunter standing on the cliffs behind the Captain's corpse rose up from his prone position and lowers his Rifle. "Ghost, bring up a coms link with the others." The Hunter requests with an young sounding electronic voice. A sharp and slightly annoyed responce came streaming through the Ghost's transmission as soon as it was formed. "Zelezo, do you have eyes on the target?!" "Why yes, Calana, I AM having a good day. Thanks for asking." The Hunter said in return. "Zel! We ne-" "Relax. I just took him out." "Good. It was your fault that he got away in the first place." "Hey I took care of it, didn't I?" He stated smugly, being returned with silence. "Why is it that you and Mr Muscles can't understand the satisfaction of a good hunt?" "Did you secure the relic yet?" "Doing it now. What is this thing anyway? From here it just looks like a metal ball." "It could be a number of thing. Data records, nav coordinates, maby a power core. If we're lucky, it could be a projectile record lends with Golden Age Tech blueprints recorded on it. I'll let you know once I get my hands on it. Just hurry back." She said sounding even more annoyed than before. "Uhh, yeah, you two can head back without me. I'll have my Ghost transport the relic to one of you, but I've got some business I need to take care of." "Oh yeah? And what business do you have this far away from the City?" "And wouldn't you like to know. It's Official Hunter Business assigned to me by Cayde-6 himself and it is Extremely Classified." "What ever it is you're doing, don't take too long. We're having drinks tonight." "Oh really? What's the occasion? " "Igness says that we have something to celebrate, but he refuses to say what for. We'll met you there, okay?" "Sounds good. I'll see you guys then." Zelezo ended the transmission and started his walk down to where the Captain lays. At the Tower A Frame walks to the Hall of the Vanguard. "Commander Zavala." "Frame." The Titan said looking up from his work, acknowledging the messenger. "Fireteam Lurraren has reported in. Their target has been eliminated and they have collected the relic." "Good. That's one less threat we have to worry about." "I've been keeping an eye on these Guardians. They were all revived within a few days of each other, and they have been active as a Fireteam for around a month. They're an intresting group and very effective for New Guardians. I have no doubt that we'll be hearing news of them in the future, whether good or bad." "Diverse to say the least. A Gunslinger, Defender and a Stormcaller. It's good to see something other than Fireteams made up of one Class. This team could be a good example for the others. All these young Titans are running into battle without the slightest hesitation of what lies ahead, but when it comes to little mingling with another Class, they're petrified. Same goes for the Warlocks and Hunters." Cayde-6 noted. "Personally I blame the Warlocks. Their lectures could scare off an entire Fallen House." He added giving Ikora a glance. "Well what do you suggest we do to solve this seemingly non problematic dilemma?" Ikora retorted. "We could throw a mixer." "We're not throwing a mixer." Zavala stated firmly. " *Sigh* One day" Cayde muttered to himself. Back in the Wild "I was not aware that you received instructions from the Vanguard." His Ghost noted as he converted the relic to light. "Nothing gets by you, dose it? Is the relic on the ship?" Zelezo responded. "Resolidifying it's physical form now. If you don't mind me asking, what is it that we're really doing out here?" Zelezo walked over to the cliffs that overlooked the landscape. He sat down and leaned against a small bolder. Once settled, he removed his helmet exposing his steel facial plating to the cool air "Enjoying the view." Zelezo said gazing out at the forest. "Reminds me of when you first found me." "When I found you, we were in Old Chicago, no where near the Eastern Flood Zone." "I know that, but just being alone out in the wild, it reminds me of those first days we were out in the wild without and way of contacting the City. Man, those were good times. You and me agenst the the Devils. I'd fall and you get me back up. Not much has changed, huh? How long did it take us to find the signal disruptor, again?" "Five days, Six hours, and Thirty Three Minutes." A few moments of silence pass before anything was said. "Let me take in the scenery a few more minutes, them we can leave, alright?" Pulling out his knife from it's holster and began to sharpen it on the edge of his forearm's armor. With each motion, he began to slowly loose himself in his memory file. This happened every now and the when he wasn't focused on anything in particular. His memories were corrupted, especially since he was on his fourth memory wipe. He always wondered what it's like for Banshee.[/spoiler] En Garde, sir

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        • KILL IT WITH FIRE

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        • Why are my eyes bleeding?

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          • Destiny has 4 subforums dedicated to it. #Offtopic is for threads that wouldn't belong in any of the other subforums here on Bungie.net. Your thread is currently a Destiny fanwork. The proper place for such a thread would be #Destiny or #Community. Please edit your thread's tags so that it's in the #Destiny or #Community subforum instead of #Offtopic.

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          • This here is an example of shitty fanfiction, folks.

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          • I was expecting this to be about the Berlin Wall, instead I got cancer. You've come to the wrong side of the hood.

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          • I was hoping for a Trump joke

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          • Am I the only one who thought this was about Attack on Titan?

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            • NO no God please no no no no...[spoiler][b][i][u]NOOOOOOO[/u][/i][/b][/spoiler]

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            • Hey. Hey you. #Destiny.

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            • My foot's kicked better fan fiction in the #desticles. You're a -goddamn- disgrace. No YOU'RE A GODDAMN DISGRACE. touché touché. [spoiler]left foot on point though[/spoiler]

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            • *polishes bar table* We don't serve you're kind here... -_-

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              I thought this would have been about the Berlin Wall

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