I don't know if "incompetent" really applies anymore. Jurkout, excuse me, Riptide looks fantastic, and like it would be a blast to play. I think you've focused on a number of the right things (like the rocket launcher run from start). I'm a little concerned though, since this map seems like it would be a very powerful map for the sniper rifle, yet you didn't mention placing any. All the same, I'm hoping this map makes the cut and will be included on-disc!