[url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpavd8aMh3g]Well, it's actually a trailer.[/url] Anyways, any critiques or anything are appreciated!
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Not too bad for being a first, but I really did not like it that much. There really was no obvious plot that gave away what the entire story was about, which is the sole purpose of a trailer. 6/10