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3/3/2008 10:11:48 PM
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The Great Forum War-Chapter one (accepting anyone for future chapters)
Well, after rewritng Chapter one, I finally wrote it. Sorry that I could not mention everyone who wanted to be in all at once, but I'll try to get to it. This is also a future story arc for a rabid's snail's [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18069593]story[/url], and will continue the story when I have the time (yeah it actually was harder than I thought). If you would still like to be in the story, you can send your request in this manner:
What would you like to be called/your name
What forum you want to live in
What you want to do in the story
[u]The Plot[/u]
So basically, the story is about the entire bungie.net as separate boroughs. For example, the flood is one part of the city while the halo 3 forum is another. It would probably have references on experiences on bungie.net and halo, and people would live their lives as if they lived in the boroughs (it could be the forum you respond to the most or a different one if you like). Trying to change Forum City around eventually leads to big consequences.
[u]Main Characters[/u]
General John was a Floodian who had moved into the Flood due to too much complaining in the halo 3 forum. Recently, there had been too much complaining about COD4 vs. halo 3, halo 4, stats and recon armor with no one dong anything about it and had enough with the crap. Some people tried to fix things like jbovey*, cookie mod*, and Edgar Allen Poe* (
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Pretty good, if I must say. If you can squeeze me in, I'll fill whatever roll you need. As long as I'm not a Halo 3 forum person. I excel at violence with chainguns.
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You have looked at mine on your other forum right?
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Entertaining story, so far....
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] PlaDD I was wondering is there any way I could be in the story, like possibly a sidekick or something or just a tiny mention like " I ran into that rat-arsed bustard Pladd the other day, and he nearly shot my face out!" Name: No-one knows, goes by Pladd Location: Wanders the "city" like a hitch-hiker, staying where he can What I want to do: He often gets in random fights just for the kick, and will help others if he sees their goal useful to his wants. Has no alliance to any faction or group. He does, however, hate one group, that group is the one who complains of the so-called broken sniper, as he is an expert sniper himself. [/quote] Hm. Never thought of a sidekick before, I might put that in. And yeah, maybe Crazy Lenny might have another appearnce ;)
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Awesome job, I think it turned out great. And don't forget about Crazy Lenny!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] i_hate_babies Yay, got the first installment of [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18089613]The Great Forum War: The Von Keshner Chronicles[/url] Posted. It's not the greatest but read and let me know what you think. GeneralJohn1031, I hope my installment pleases you.[/quote] Nice I like it. I started one cuz my characters gonna need a back ground as well you know? [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18102384&viewreplies=true]Link[/url]
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Yay, got the first installment of [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18089613]The Great Forum War: The Von Keshner Chronicles[/url] Posted. It's not the greatest but read and let me know what you think. GeneralJohn1031, I hope my installment pleases you.
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I was wondering is there any way I could be in the story, like possibly a sidekick or something or just a tiny mention like " I ran into that rat-arsed bustard Pladd the other day, and he nearly shot my face out!" Name: No-one knows, goes by Pladd Location: Wanders the "city" like a hitch-hiker, staying where he can What I want to do: He often gets in random fights just for the kick, and will help others if he sees their goal useful to his wants. Has no alliance to any faction or group. He does, however, hate one group, that group is the one who complains of the so-called broken sniper, as he is an expert sniper himself. [Edited on 03.03.2008 6:24 PM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] vagabondiss i is be in chaptor?[/quote] Okay, it depends on what you want to be in the story (read the submition and plot to get a generally idea)
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i is be in chaptor?
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^Thanks, it's also in the flood library, I'll plan chapter 2 especially when I'm daydreaming or have nothing to do :P [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] a rabid snail Is anyone reading [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18069593]my story[/url]? It has to do with a character not in the story yet. I'm sure it'd be interesting!* Please? I needz teh feedback!!1 *About as interesting as an argy artist with a red paintbrush.[/quote] Don't worry, I'm watching you -_- [Edited on 03.03.2008 5:40 PM PST]
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Is anyone reading [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=18069593]my story[/url]? It has to do with a character not in the story yet. I'm sure it'd be interesting!* Please? I needz teh feedback!!1 *About as interesting as an argy artist with a red paintbrush.
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I liked it. Pros: Good action scenes. Leaves plenty of room for a good story. The background storys to the Characters is awesome. I loved the little explosion clip. :D Cons: I suggest changing the format because some parts are hard to read and understand who is talking. Every once in a while there were words or phrases that made no sence. Story seemed to jump around a lot. I found it hard to know exactly where they were. Decription of scenery was minimal. I could say more but that's it for now. It was good.
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did you copy/paste or just type it out all in the text box? cuz if you have to type the whole thing up thats pretty stupid. and if not i dont know why it isnt working for me but that means it hates me or something.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] i_hate_babies Did you have any trouble with posting your story? cuz it says i still have like 3000 characters left in my post but it keeps saying i have exceded the 10,000 character limit.[/quote] No, I had like 500 characters left. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] pie please You didn't add me.[/quote] I'll try to add you as one of the main villian's. Thanks for the support guys, I'll see if anyone else likes it once it's on the front page. Anyone :P?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] pie please You didn't add me.[/quote] Did you ask to be in it?
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Did you have any trouble with posting your story? cuz it says i still have like 3000 characters left in my post but it keeps saying i have exceded the 10,000 character limit.
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You didn't add me.
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Lol, I would live in the flood.
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Niiiiice.
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Ha,clever. I like it =]
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Its alot better that the first one anyway. Its quite good for the first chapter/Intro. Good to see the cliffhanger at the end. Much better John, Keep up the good work. I would help but, I've got to get to work man, sorry about that.
