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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • Not talking about u

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  • well sry then, ive been having a sh** day today and i dont need more crap to piss me off

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  • sorry guys but i got fed up with all the people who come here just to flame him and tell us the book sucks and ive been with the book since day one and siage 1-82 thers been people flaming all of us our ideas and stuff i just think that we need more positive feed back and that we can get rid of the people who just flame Brilliant and have no good comments or things that could help the story at all its people saying things like the book sucks and its just like the game etc etc those people make the rest of us look bad u know? i wanna keep this clean and respect those who spend alot of time whre others are too lazy to do so or do better

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  • Flamers are heretics, worthy of neither pity nor mercy. We shall grind them into dust. And continue our march to glorious salvation! :)

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  • i agree .. too bad we cant black list people :P then we could get rid of flamers our selves and while we were at it sticky this post

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  • Trust me after seeing 2 pages of hate they wont dare be dicks again. By the BY who thought everything in the last chapter happened to fast. The stations exploding and such happened way way fast.

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  • i thikn it was a little too fast but if you think about it the only reason the level is so long is becasuse it takes time to get the cheife to teh bomb but this is from cortona and Hoods pov so i think it seems like less time then it really is

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  • I'm not a -blam!- flamer i'm just stating some facts! 1.He used dialoge from the game. Thats just boring dont even talk about that we all played the FIRST level of halo2. Thats not fanfic thats copyright! 2.Stop flaming flamers! Thats all you aree doing is addding fuel to tehir "FIRE". And then you turn into them. 3.He started of doing good than he -blam!- everything up.

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  • I just wanted to make something clear here. I'm aware that a lot of people that have been reading my story have come here and started flaming. I want you guys to know that I don't condone what their doing and I find it annoying myself. I enjoy reading Brilliants story myself and I don't like to see Flames on this thread. All I can really say is, guys, if you like my story more that's great. But please, you don't have to come here and bash Brilliant's story, if you want to make a comment about it just say something on my thread, I'd prefer you did that than coming here and saying it. I want to apologize to all the fans of Brilliants work that have had to put up with flamers.

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  • If you would be so kind to read my reply a few INCEHS HIGHER! i explained everything for those of the aww nvmd. just for the record i wasnt flaming(much) i was just stating a fact. I used too like sirbrilliant's work but he is just going down hill fast.

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  • thx clark, your absolutely right. this isn't the place to go flaming about stories anyone is writing. if you don't like it, don't read it. its that simple. if you do like it, but you think there is something that simply needs improvement, then just say it. i don't mind, and would actually be much abliged to have the extra help. its not every day that i have the ability to write stuff and have alot of it be corrected only minutes after posting it.

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  • dude go pro man do this for a job you are really good and keep up the good work ooh can you maybee put it on a web site or at least on a thread that has the full story so i can print it. never mind goth it my self (edit) keep on doing our stuff [Edited on 2/23/2005 2:51:57 AM]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Prowlaz I'm not a -blam!- flamer i'm just stating some facts! 1.He used dialoge from the game. Thats just boring dont even talk about that we all played the FIRST level of halo2. Thats not fanfic thats copyright! 2.Stop flaming flamers! Thats all you aree doing is addding fuel to tehir "FIRE". And then you turn into them. 3.He started of doing good than he -blam!- everything up.[/quote] Its the first 3 chapters that are following H2. They have to follow the game or people will have no clue what is happening. I dont see how you dont understand this. The rest of the story wont be about the game. He is gonna follow the spartans until after H2 and then MC and the arbitor will pop up again. Jut chill

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  • I think that your writing gets more brilliant each time you write a chapter Brilliant rocks

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  • I like Mr_Clarks story just as good as sir_brilliant's. Anybody who disagree's can make their own thread for that. Than they'll get blacklisted and we won't be bothered by them anymore. [Edited on 2/23/2005 7:09:15 AM]

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  • just a few points that come up as i remember them - 1. im really really sure that earth has more than 3 super mac guns - johnson says 'the cairo is just ONE of three hundred geosync platforms' implying that the other platforms are also MAC stations - geosync just means that they stay in the same orbital position over earth, not that they keep other stations in place. also think about it logically - if reach had 20 super macs (im pretty sure its 20) then it makes sense that the homeworld that theyve gone to all that trouble to protect is gonna have way more. 2. super macs can kill (or shoot through at the very least) a covie ship in 1 - the sarge says 'any one of these stations can put a round clean through a covenant capital ship' or something pretty much like that, and also in fall of reach it says about those macs nailing carriers and stuff in 1. 3. id kinda agree with prowlaz - brilliant is gd, but i must admit that the last chap wasnt quite up to his usual standard 4. for those who said that clark was all 'bam bam bam' rather than plot - read his stuff again, especially the last chap; theyre way more about plot and character development maybe even than brilliants (thers certainly alot mre action in brilliants than dialogue if im remembering correctly, which im pretty sure i am)

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  • I hate leaving things unresolved. Reach only had 20 super macs. Earth has hundreds in groups of 3. Again thank you for the excellent story and keep up the great work. ignore all flamers. edit: didn't post in time so karp answered it for you, and he's right about being able to kill a ship with one round [Edited on 2/23/2005 8:23:57 AM]

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  • Hey... Just to get peoples mind of the damn flamer:) Are you, Sir brilliant, going to continue the story you began writing or are you gonna start it all over again withthis new thing?? Should i put it all in seperate doc.s or keap it as it is?? 'cause no way i'm deleting it... just wanted to know if it was meant to be together?? If anyone else know then please respond:)

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  • omg plp you all that oppose him leave because sir_brilliont is writing more than one book like on all the halo books the first one is cald book 0 as in kind of a prolouge remember in the fall of reach it says how the spatans grew up and how they got there strangth well sir_brilliontis just writing the first who nows how lougn it will be covering the game he might write 3 different sections leading up to the ark witch he first started to writed you no the flood copied the first halo game and there was other things not in the game . just plz be pasiont it will get a lot better..... [Edited on 2/23/2005 11:14:06 AM]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] joexxx55 omg plp you all that oppose him leave because sir_brilliont is writing more than one book like on all the halo books the first one is cald book 0 as in kind of a prolouge remember in the fall of reach it says how the spatans grew up and how they got there strangth well sir_brilliontis just writing the first who nows how lougn it will be covering the game he might write 3 different sections leading up to the ark witch he first started to writed you no the flood copied the first halo game and there was other things not in the game . just plz be pasiont it will get a lot better..... [/quote] I could not have said it better myself. Listen to Joexx people.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] sir_brilliant thx clark, your absolutely right. this isn't the place to go flaming about stories anyone is writing. if you don't like it, don't read it. its that simple. if you do like it, but you think there is something that simply needs improvement, then just say it. i don't mind, and would actually be much abliged to have the extra help. its not every day that i have the ability to write stuff and have alot of it be corrected only minutes after posting it.[/quote] OK i made a forum to flame hope fully we will both gang in popularity its called sir_briliont VR Mr clark WITCH ONE IS BETTER ??? the halo books are HOT!!!!

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  • ok, i want to clarify some things. first of all, do any of you actually know what "geosync" means? i doubt it, and i didn't know myself, but i looked it up. its short for geosynchronous, which means geostationary. the definition to that is, and i quote, "[color=red]being or having an equatorial orbit requiring an angular velocity the same as that of the earth so that the position of a satellite in such an orbit is fixed with respect to the earth[/color]" with that in mind, this means that there could simply 300 stations orbiting earth, not necessarily 300 super mac guns. i mean, think about it. why would the cairo, athens, and malta be so important if they were only 3 of 300? thats completely idiotic to say that in halo2 that the covenant destroyed 2 and managed to land on earth, when there are actually 300 of them. i think that there may be 300 different stations, all of which may have some sort of weaponry on them, but that they aren't super mac guns. of course, this is only my oppionion, but it seems logical and right. otherwise, the covenant would never be able to get near earth, even with a fleet that destroyed Reach. hell, if the unsc had that kind of firepower, the covenant would never have been a problem. also, you guys complain that the story has too much to do with the game? there are only a few lines that actually are from the game, and it makes the story seem more realistic to the halo universe. if you don't think so, thats fine too. but don't flame me about it... i only do it because its something many writers do when they write like i am: about something that is already out, and they just add on to.

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  • But sir, isn't it said somewhere that the MAC stations can move only very slowly? I mean, if there are like 100 covenant Capital Ships, it would still be hard for the MAC stations to take them out before they can get in orbit around Earth due to the MAC gun's very slow moving, right?

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  • oh well let the man write, oh and one mac can go through a covenant ship so if there clustered, then they might take out more than one, thats my aspect

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  • I'll be honest man, it was decent, not great, just step away from repetative language.

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  • well no one is perfect

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