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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • I think it was okay for an ametuer writer. You have good ideas but you need to know more about the covenant culture and how the would speak and think.That is all.

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  • Hey Payback. To answer your question, the Reclaimers and the Forerunners could be really smart, right? But if you think about it, what happened in the bible before the Flood? Every human lived for hundreds of years. What is the greatest thing you can recieve from science? A longer life span. But after the Flood, all of the human only lived a hundred years, thats if they were lucky. So, to answer your question, Forerunners were very intelligent, just that the conflict against the Flood caused the activation of Halo, which killed all of the Forerunners, thus making Humans start all over and having to learn everything they once knew by whatever caused the primordial soup to begin making organisms. But if you want a more fact-filled explaination, instead of a Biblical one, the Forerunners could of been killed in one six "Great Extintions" one of which could of been caused by Halo. And then an Asteroid could of buried all of the technology left behind by the Forerunners.

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  • great! i'd read that book more! more! more!

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] flaming idiot [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] JcHeat [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] masterchiefx200 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] JcHeat ur chapters r sik bruv wen u doin the next 1[/quote] learn to spell[/quote] I can spell perfectly fine as you can see. i jus prefer 2 rite like dis cos its quiker[/quote] Then could you get a dumbass translator for the rest of us because we would like to keep our eyesight instead of having our eyes burned out by your hideous typing[/quote] or howabout i keep ritin like dis and u go luv urself [Edited on 1/24/2005 2:17:02 PM]

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  • I see you must have had your parents make this account for you because someone with a mouth like that and typing like that could only be about 8 or 9 years old. [Edited on 1/24/2005 2:12:01 PM]

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  • I am not 8 years old and sorry for swearing i will type properly if u wish. Where can i read other fan fic is there anywhere else?

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  • stop the hurt, this is a thread for reading awesome H3 stories, not -blam!-ing to each other like 5 year olds. You can read the story [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=1775334&viewreplies =true&postRepeater1-p=1]Here[/url] with no interruptions, where sir_brilliant and I have posted his chapters. [Edited on 1/24/2005 2:21:52 PM]

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  • following that link you provided i saw what looked to be the title of this unofficial novel..... Halo: The Ark.... Sounds Catchy! Keep up the work sir_brill....and mc117wags you stick by your mate, he could do with all the help you can give. As for everyone contradicting the chapters so far: 1) Lay off the man, he is doing this just for fun, sir_brill could stop writing if he wanted to and that would upset a million of halo fans.... 2) Lets see you do better!

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  • Th thing with Sir brilliant, is that there will always be people out there who could do better, hell, even I could as well, but I give him so much credit because he does it and does it well. Now if you ask me if I think Bungie will give him the rights to make the next book, I doubt it. Though if they DID it would be a different book and definately not what we are reading in this thread. Bungie would give him about a page of information about Halo 3 that we can't know until the book would hit shelves, and they would force him to take a certain caution when developing key characters. so really, IF sir 'B' was to write Halo: the Ark, it would not be as good as this fanfic unless he put some SERIOUS effort into it.

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  • sir brillint should put all the chapters on the front page so we don't have to read every page to find it.

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  • brilliant story so far! your username truly fits you!

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  • I will make a beeter one and ill be with it tommorow

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  • If anyone was interested in mine it is in the Library.

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  • This is the best fanfic I have ever read....Itwould be a sin for bungie not consider your writing for at least a fan art honor or onroable mentioning...or something.....I spent an hour cathcing up cause today was the first day I checked this and i have to say this is amazing. You deserve all the attantion you are getting and you should definitly keep up the good work.

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  • Well, I recently read FOR and FS, two books I loved, and this started off just as good, nice job Sir Brilliant. I also have my own literary tryouts on this theme and I'll expose them here, I hope you don't mind, it's pretty short and inspired on yours, I jumped many chapters from where you ended the last one. The Master Chief clutched his SMG and his combat knife as he ran through the corridor of the forerunner ship towards a group of four brutes, tougher than nails, as Sergeant Johnson would’ve said. “Team Bravo, run for cover,” he said with a calm but imposing tone. “Roger that,” The ODST team didn’t hesitate to follow the Chief’s orders, some of them were willing to take a look at how the Chief was going to handle the four brutes, and he wasn’t going to disappoint them. He rammed his armored boot on the face of the biggest one, braking the armor plating, crushing his skull and killing him instantly, then he stabbed another one repeatedly on the face until he reached his brain, sure kill. The brute next to him slammed his massive fist on the Chief’s chest, making his shield go down with a blast, but it was also too late for him to strike the decisive blow because a full SMG clip hit him on his chest and face, leaving the brute blind and ready to be torn apart by the BR55 rifle rounds of Team Bravo. The last brute looked at the seven foot tall figure covered in purple blood and roared, went berserk and charged towards him, pointing the scythe of his weapon towards the Master Chief and making an incredible uppercut capable of slashing through the hardest alloy of metal, but the Spartan wasn’t there anymore and the brute found out too late. A combat knife slashed his spinal cord in a lightning fast movement, that even Kelly would have been proud of, and he fell to the ground, incapable of any movement. He waited until his shield recharged and then ran towards the position marked on his HUD, placing his combat knife on his magnetic holster. “Clear, move out!” He said. “You sure had fun, Chief,” said Corporal Felter, “Now let’s carry on with the serious business.” “Woo-hoo, penetrate and annihilate!” A soldier shouted out, “that’s what we ODSTs are used to!” “Seriousness, soldiers, this mission requires it.” John was uneasy with the mission. There had been serious changes since Delta Halo, too many in his opinion. Now Spartans couldn’t operate as a separate Team, they were divided and ordered to man ODST squads so that troops received a morale boost as well as much more tactical coordination. It was a proven fact that one Spartan was more than enough to change the course of any ground battle, space was a different thing. The problem was that he started to rely too much on these soldiers, and John wasn’t too fond of ODSTs. “Eckler, place a C12 charge on that panel, time fuse to twenty minutes, start the timer when I say so.” “Immediately, sir!” “Sebratt and Fontelli, cover the entrance, if anything moves, kill it.” “Roger that.” Their mission was to retrieve essential data on "The Ark" from the rests of the crashed Forerunner ship. The ODSTs hadn’t flinched at all when they were briefed with such a suicidal mission. The ONI spooks had also equipped the team with a new smart AI, one of Colonel Ackerson’s creations, and the Chief had strict orders to insert the crystal containing the AI and retrieve it when the process was complete, he wasn’t allowed to interact with it as he was used to with Cortana. Ackerson’s orders. Running through the corridor the squad encountered a brute. Not good, black armor. He grabbed his combat knife, and readied himself to slit the hairy bastard in half, but the brute was faster, he grabbed the MC and threw him down the corridor. The Chief flipped backwards, grabbed impulse with his hands landed on his feet, throwing his knife at the brute’s chest, but it only bounced off the thick breast plate. Then, it got dirty. The Chief ran towards the brute and started punching the brute’s face and chest with all his strength, punches that would have easily broken through titanium-A battleplate, while ODST Team Bravo was shooting the massive monster’s back, though the brute didn’t care much about the punches or the shots and grabbed the Chief, holding him with his powerful arms in a spine-breaking embrace, just to find out that MJOLNIR Mark VI armor was much harder than he expected, and that his head was no longer armored, the Chief had ripped the head plate off and was cracking the brute’s skull with it, till it finally died. “Pick up your jaws and follow me up close, there’ll be more of these on their way, grab as many plasma grenades as you can.” Team Bravo fell back into consciousness, followed suit and finally reached the temporary headquarters established amidst the ruins of the Forerunner ship, and they were once again awe-stricken by what they saw. The Chief fell into a deeply studied combat pose and looked at the sixteen spec-ops brutes guarding the Prophet of Truth. But he was not alone, the flash of an energy sword being activated beside him told him that it was going to be a fair fight, the elites had arrived in time. [Edited on 1/24/2005 4:23:03 PM]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] coviekiller007 I think it was okay for an ametuer writer. You have good ideas but you need to know more about the covenant culture and how the would speak and think.That is all.[/quote] Not being a total -blam!- but dude dont tell someone that they arent doing a good job when you just joined today. You probably couldnt do anywhere near the quality of work that this guy has so shut up. IF you can do better than post something better if not shut up. Sorry i cant be more "delicate" but im an -blam!- and i dont specialize in being nice.

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  • Hey Rone, good job man i like ure story also, it's very clinging. I could say it meets up to Sir_Brilliants story. Good Job!

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  • That was a pretty good installment. you should message sir_brilliant and you guys could co write it. You did have a few grammer problems but otherwise great story. And sir_brilliant when is the next installment?

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  • Thats pretty nice, but yeah, you need some help with the fragment sentences and some other things. but besides that, its great! :D ....also, how do you make it so my halo 2 gamertag is pic thing is showing

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  • Freakin' Awesome!!!

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  • Sounds good

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] TWINK21 That was a pretty good installment. you should message sir_brilliant and you guys could co write it. You did have a few grammer problems but otherwise great story.[/quote] The fact is I'm spanish and this is the very best I can achieve at writing in english. If you could please point out where I commited those mistakes I would be very satisfied to correct them.

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  • Hey, I just want to say that I am very impressed with this thread. I just found it today, and only one word comes to mind: WOW! The amount of talent that has become part of this thread, not to mention all of the great comments that have added and maintained it. I look forward to anything else that comes out of this. Keep it up!

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  • Haha that's exceptionnaly good for a spanish person, keep it up!!! Sir_Brilliant, don't keep us waiting

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